by Cathetel
I am really enjoying this. Yours is a well-told story, with lots of details that really help the reader to visualize Emil's farm and the developing relationship between slave and master.
..... to what may turn out to be a fantastic story with absorbing characters. Sorry about the four stars; I meant to hit five but hit four by accident. Mea culpa. I am sure to correct that with the next chapter. 🙂
You have a pretty gòd talent at world building, really enjoying it so far!
Your story is really good compared to most of the stories on this site, so I would really like for you to keep writing. You're a very good writer, as is your story. I don't mean to sound impatient, but it's been almost 4 months since the last installment and I really think you should of had something by now.
Intriguing and although the first installment is intro and build up, I wasn't distracted for a moment. Keep writing!!!
And characters that I could come to empathize with. I'm not sure I'd like them, and I think perhaps one should not entirely like the characters in a dystopian setting - it takes away from the reader's appreciation of all that has changed.
I love dystopian stories.
Looking forward to more, and posted soon, I hope.
I enjoyed this part. Good story plot. It would read easier if you had smaller paragraphs.