by RetiredReprobate
Always enjoyable. His wife, her lovers, all got what they deserved. Good story.
This is either the third or fourth time I have read it. Excellent story, none of your routine stuff. A favorite of mine. Thank you, author, for writing it.
Nice story of revenge. Good storyline, character development and sex.
This story was completely unbelievable. It was sheer tongue-in-cheek. It was so far out there, that it makes one scratch one's (head)! And it was entirely WONDERFUL! A joy to read, a humorous little story of lust, foul play and MURDER. Don't we all wish that we could be clever enough to write it!
Just fucking WOW.
I normally would not even bother to read a 7 page story. I made an exception and read the 1st page and was hooked.
A great story and wonderfully well written. I love how the author kept giving us little snippets of information that never gave away the plot and then, in the end ,the relation.
Great job RR
Ya lost me with the liquid nitrogen, and I stopped right there. No matter what happened after, this is beyond saving. A real man would have come back with a gun.
I thought you could not write a better story than your first three,it just goes to show how wrong I was.
Really enjoyed the ever changing dream and the reveal at the end was predictable but having the final act of malice revealed in the dream was a nice touch!
This was one of the most origional stories I've read on this site. I had to read it in one sitting. Great fun. thank you author.