by 09cutter
An idea, the wife sharing cuckold crow complains a lot, but they do not want to step into the publicity. More and more gay people step into the publicity. It was very interesting to know the neighbor, colleague, relative are cucks, hotwives.
Lesson learned: his mother deserved all the beating!!! A mother that in the moment that finds out her son liberated her from a abuser husband, that had sent her to Hospital, strokes her child in the head and turns him in a vegetal, deserves all the beating...This is a sad story about people that deserved all to be institutionalized...1*
Hey I rather liked the tempo of the story, always something else to add to the hits, but a really poor ending made me wish I had passed this over.
You could have added 'Gay' in tags and that could have saved us lots of guys from reading this piece of shit.
This fine little post travelled nicely from erotic spousal sharing evolving then into the resolution of an unsolved mystery with some incestous undertones. Somewhat surprisingly the characters were well developed resulting in a plausible if not fantastic conclusion. This was a fun read. I look forward to exploring your prior posts and those yet to come.
Gave you credit for the originality. Maybe apply that wit and imagination to a more interesting and gripping story? This was just a stupid perverted jamboree. And, lose the big cock = incredible sex cliche'. That's just too predictable to be interesting. I just wish it was true.
Not really a surprising twist. Maybe a slight twist that both Ed's Mother and his wife were there, but Ed being a murderer wasn't a surprise. But the gay aspect trumps everything and this didn't belong here.
. . . no stars because I have no rational basis for rating this crazy story. I think it took two or three days to finish it because it was so F'd Up. Even really good drugs don't quite go deep enough into the psyche to explain how bizarre this story is. Author managed a way through a universe I am not at all acquainted with.
The only thing missing was that Ed's mum should have fucked him too.
you think this is erotic? I guess it takes all kind to make the world go around.
Holy Molee !
I didn't see that coming . Very creative plot . You get 3*s . Wow , I'm just flabbergasted ( I finally get to use that word in a sentence ,lol)!! Thanks Cutter man .
AMerryman
Loved the Rob and Kim interaction. I personally find male/male sex revolting so that part was very disappointing. But to each their own. I liked the end, Ed should have died. Glad Kim & Rob ended together, nice love story there.
Keep trying, just because everyone doesn't think it is the best story on the site don't give up. I know that bad reviews hurt, I'v had my share, but fuck the bastards, most of them couldn't write a sentence let alone a decent story.
Unusual, perverse and diverting at the same time. Definitely not a run of the mill LW story. 4* for the effort and let's see if you can follow it.
A disgusting account of self love! The author thinks he has a dig bick, lol
One star....
hope you die a slow death while thinking about your dead ex wife who fucked over 100 men!!
Great way to write a sex story, full of good descriptions and characters, and what a great plot with a twist.
Love how small the wife was and her getting broken in by a friend with a huge cock. I can’t help but think if her husband had been able to make her orgasm he could have gotten her pregnant. But he was twisted by his childhood experience so he was doomed to a messed up life. I do like the twists. As the family bull he should have had access to all the women but especially Kim.