All Comments on 'Educating Alan'

Short and sweet. We'll, not so sweet. I guess that'll be the last party they attend.

Ha again.

Well, not so sweet.

Amateur mistake.

So one guy is pissed that another guy grabbed his wife's ass and proceeds to claim the second guys wife is a whore......this is not a story.

Fuck that. That's too much work and I wouldn't go to most of them. As for the rest, if he's that clueless then let him be. He's too fucking stupid to be allowed to procreate.

the 1st to care, buyer beware. TK U MLJ LV NV

Not really a story, but instead a good joke...3*

Is the stuff Mac told him really true or is it just revenge? Can he ask his wife about it without revealing that he touched Angie´s ass? Could he even believe her? Can he ask the other men without revealing he´s totally clueless?

to offset the asshole annony who reads all of these stories and then votes a 1 to keep he score low. What a fuck old ugly lonely fat fag this man whore is.

...I regret you have just thrown a few bread crumbs and left it at that. Not really a story...but a nice idea.

I like these short stories, but by the time the author gets to the really interesting part he leaves you hanging.

STOP IT!!!!!

He should try it with her and see if she would be willing to go into the garden. It does sound like he was unconnected.

Lied ?

No !

Not Britease !

You started down the btb slope. Why not finish it? I mean finish the damn story.

By that I mean that if the goal is to be very brief, then story telling tends to take a back seat...or the rumble seat.

Chilley

You're too good of a writer/ story teller to waste your effort and reputation on this. When I see your name on a new offering I immediately expect a well written and interesting story. I'm thinking 5 stars at the beginning. This was a disappointment in that it had no story. If this is the beginning of a series or a novella then it should have been mentioned at the beginning. And, it's not to late to develop an story with an ending.

I look forward to your next effort.

Lighten up a bit.

OK, so this is not Britease's best. But it's good, nonetheless. And well worth reading for a giggle.

And it only took you a few minutes to read it, so you didn't waste much time on something which turned out to be a little less than what you may have been hoping for.

Lue

Good one Brit

For the story.

A fun read about Norfolk folk and no I will not mention the joke about inter breeding in Norfolk, oops!, silly me. Of course originating from Suffolk, now residing in Spain, being referred to as carrot crunchers and tractor boy's I would probably be slower on the uptake than Alan.

That was some JPB bullshit there. You're better than that.

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Cute. Even without the title, it is clear about half-way through how it is going to end ... or begin!

EddBoy ... Mac is a common nickname for men whose last name is MacAdam or McDuff ... et cetera. Regardless of his surname, like Timothy or Mohammed or Sergio or Gustaf. (Perhaps not so common in Scotland.)

4*

who hoped it would be a longer story, but it's a matter of having the time, a commodity in short supply since I retired. Not helped by the fact that I pressed the wrong button a few months ago. Still not sure what I did wrong but lost half the stuff on by computer, including my entire file of half finished stories and plots. Got to start from scratch again.

Yes, nice and short. Glad to see you writing- a shame about losing the files, I hate when that happens. All my stuff is saved to the cloud nowadays. Hope to see more once you've got things sorted.

Another unfinished cuck & slut story.

No score because it's not finished!

Did he drag her ass out of there and stop things?

Did he divorce her cheating ass?

Or worse, did he cuck out?

Sorry ???

... still an interesting twist.

You could do better, though

The End of coarse. Your wife obviously doesn't love or respect you and sluts around behind your back.

But as Lue says, good for a giggle.

To some veddy interesting conversations or more on the home front very soon. Signed: BTW

A good amusing start but that’s all 2*.

Nothing new, worn out plot line. Wife is a slut and everyone knows but her clueless husband. Of course there are no consequences and the writer makes it seem normal that every wife should be a whore. Wonder if this is just another factor in the fall of the empire.

totally predictable. Might it have been better if Mac told Alan that if he wanted a grope that he, Mac, had the wife he was talking about stripped, primed and ready and waiting in the guest bedroom.

"Enjoy yourself, old "pal."

What to believe your own thoughts or what you have heard? And how do you prove it? You confront her and she will deny of course. You ask the other husbands and will they confess? Doubt it. Some how you need to keep an eye on her I guess then drop the bomb.

Pathetic

As expected of you

Kind of funny, sort of.

Just a shit story, & unfinished at that. 1 star; writing wasn't even that great

Pleasant, witty but rather unsubstantial.

LA

If he has no proof, slug the bastard for talking about your wife that way. If he's not lying, you are free to do with his wife whatever he's done with yours. If she refuses, he has to find a way to make it right with you. He has a big debt to repay.

If it was my wife or girlfriend it would be the end, very publicly too.