All Comments on 'Eileen’s First Mistake'

by WilliamRollins

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I enjoyed the story

It was a good story and I would like to read more if you are inclined to do so with the characters

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Tense

stick to first person...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

great story! id like to see a chapter 2

Pulsifer42Pulsifer42over 10 years ago
NICE

Well done. I enjoyed it. Thanks. Look forward to more of your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
amanda

i was scared the first time with a black guy it was enormus compared to the guys before him i felt like he was killing me with it but after a while my body did adjust to it i never had so much cum shoot all over me in my life

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
mistake?

So what was the mistake?

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