All Comments on 'Eileen’s First Mistake'

by WilliamRollins

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
mistake?

So what was the mistake?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
amanda

i was scared the first time with a black guy it was enormus compared to the guys before him i felt like he was killing me with it but after a while my body did adjust to it i never had so much cum shoot all over me in my life

Pulsifer42Pulsifer42over 10 years ago
NICE

Well done. I enjoyed it. Thanks. Look forward to more of your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

great story! id like to see a chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Tense

stick to first person...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I enjoyed the story

It was a good story and I would like to read more if you are inclined to do so with the characters

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