All Comments on 'Elaine in Las Vegas Ch. 02'

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NeverEndMeNeverEndMeover 12 years ago
More!

I loved it! And half of me expected that Hunter knew where she was the whole time...lol.

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
The chase was exquisite.

Especially so because we didn't know whether Bruce and Bligh were connected to friend or foe.

A very exciting sequence.

oifugovoifugovover 12 years ago
Great!

Nice to finally meet Hunter, hope to see more of him! I love how he uses Elaine, a man who knows how to treat a woman like her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

When's the next chapter?

beygaze1beygaze1over 12 years agoAuthor

It's been submitted. Look for it in the next few days. Thanks for reading!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Enjoyed the great outdoors. Elaine is being degraded more and more. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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If you are new to Elaine, the order of the stories is: 1-When Elaine Met Amanda 2-Elaine at the Party (a prequel) 3-Taking Elaine (the traditional start to the story) 4-Elaine in Las Vegas 5-Elaine on the Run 6-Stealing Elaine 7-Owning Elaine 8-The Slaving World (takes place d...

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