All Comments on 'Electric Touch'

Love the idea, the story had all the parts, story line, mystique, sex, intrigue. Shall there be a part two?

I loved it. I hope you will write about the fun and games the four of you have.

This story looks like the begining of something good.

Predictable and flat. No mystery, no tension. Still, the writing is decent.

This story was ok, nothing special, until Weiner boy made her call him Master. Any moron who needs to be called Master, isn't one, he's just a pathetic little boy. It ruined the story, in my opinion.

keep up the good stories

You should take creative writing classes of some sort. There was no substance in this, at all.

You have an innocence that makes the story work.

Good story. Ive seen your other stuff, also good. My only critic is that there are no sequels

Mind control is a fun thing to play with, and you do it quite well

Keep it up :)

Written by a 14 yo.

Looked like the beginning of a series but apparently not, too bad. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.