by MissChievious
Where's me an elevator??!! Dang is it hot in here?
Very nice... Will this continue? ;-)
BgDrgn13
I hope the elevator brakes down a lot.
Thanks
I am just now reading all the comments on my story above. I was wondering if you had any suggestions to continue with it or write more?
You might want to make use of the Literotica editors -- your verb tenses get a bit dodgy sometimes, along with little other bits of grammar. It adds up and makes a difference on readability :).