All Comments on 'Elevator Music'

You might want to make use of the Literotica editors -- your verb tenses get a bit dodgy sometimes, along with little other bits of grammar. It adds up and makes a difference on readability :).

I am just now reading all the comments on my story above. I was wondering if you had any suggestions to continue with it or write more?

I hope the elevator brakes down a lot.

Thanks

Where's me an elevator??!! Dang is it hot in here?

Very nice... Will this continue? ;-)

BgDrgn13

Nice Miss loved the story keep them cumming ..

SnowMan