All Comments on 'Elise and Emily Ch. 02'

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galisongalisonover 7 years ago
Thank you

These stories are so hot, thank you so much for sharing them with us.

galisongalisonover 7 years ago
Sorry!

Just read your "Some words." Wish I could offer advice about it not feeling like a hobby. If it helps, you can probably get away with some self publishing. It takes a lot of investment (time, getting your name out there) for it to work out but there's a lot of people doing it.

BrisbaneBornBrisbaneBornover 7 years ago
So he finally reaps the rewards :)

Feels like its been a long time coming, but it feels right as well mate. I think if you ended the series right here, or even left it for an extended period, noone would be sold short. You've done a great job :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Please answer!

is there gonna be a continuation?? this series is seriously the best. i'm sure i'm not the only one who wants more but if this is the last for this series, please do tell so we wouldn't be refreshing daily waiting for the next update cuz it hurts. :( but really, great story! 10/10!!

Captain_RonCaptain_Ronover 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you

First of all, I'd like to thank everyone for their kind words. Your support and encouragement means a lot to me.

Since "Anon" asked directly. Will I continue this particular series? At this point, probably not. I currently don't have any ideas for a Chapter 3 and don't like keeping people waiting too long between chapters. Chapter 2 already took way longer to complete than I intended and I think the ending more or less works as it is.

There will likely be another Elise story, maybe sooner rather than later, I still have a few ideas but they don't really fit in as part of this series.

I can update my profile page when new stories are on their way for anyone who's interested.

smalltitslovrsmalltitslovrover 7 years ago
Great work!

This is a great chapter! I love everything about it. I hope you do more, but I also completely understand how hard it can be to find time and motivation to write sometimes.

I've got some ideas for a chapter 3, so I'll PM them to you.

Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Idea

No more ideas for this series? How about Elise finally fucks Ryan? I've been getting blue balls waiting for Elise to get caught cheating,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
chapter 3

can't wait for the next chapter

Sailman66Sailman66over 6 years ago
Totally Brilliant!

This is the best story you have written about Elise and Kevin. I am seriously impressed by your writing talent. The fact you have now gotten Kevin getting more accepting and indeed doing likewise is just brilliant. Can't wait for the next well written chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very hot story!

Heading off to the next chapter now.

sennodensennodenalmost 2 years ago

Soooo, Elise got fingerbanged and then gave Ryan a blowjob right? Yeah totally on the same level as kissing

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January 28, 2023 I had always wanted to make a series out of That Was Then. I must have tried writing a follow up 100 times. Chapter 2 will be posted soon, only four years later than intended. --- Thank you to everyone who took the time to read my stories, I hoped you enjo...

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