Elise and My Roommates Ch. 03

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Elise paused for a moment, then said shyly, "Sara is really pretty."

She took a deep breath and continued, "Thinking about it now when I'm not acting, it's really embarrassing to know Jeff saw me doing all those things, but it was really hot at the time for Sara and me knowing that guys were getting excited watching us play."

My mind was reeling, I would have to find out what happened. I knew Elise would give me details if I asked, I just needed to let her finish what she wanted to say first.

Elise looked down and saw the large bulge in my pants and giggled. "I see you like the idea of Sara and me. Now that I think about it, I think there's even a few pics on my phone. If you're interested I'd really like to look at them with you, I think that would be fun. I'll tell you all about Sara and me later if you want, but there's other stuff I want to say first. I'm really sorry you didn't get to be there, I'll try to make it up to you somehow."

I groaned, my friend got to watch one of my fantasies because he was too chicken of his ex.

"Anyway, we finished the dare game then went to bed. Sara and Scott started having sex on the bed beside us," Elise said. "They didn't even care that we could see. I think they wanted us to watch," she added, sounding astonished.

"It was really hot watching the two of them and when they were done they were looking at us to see what we would do, so Jeff and I acted for them for a little while," Elise said blushing.

I know I was supposed wait for her to finish her story, but I spoke anyway, "Acted?"

Elise spoke rapidly, like she did when she was nervous or excited, "Yeah, you know, we pretended we were a couple and acted for a while until Jeff was done, then he went to sleep. I really wanted to act a few minutes longer, but Jeff was too tired and not able to so I needed to act alone for a little while. Sara and Scott were okay with that and just watched me until I was done."

"Huh? Slow down, you're confusing me and not making any sense. Okay, so you pretended to be a couple and acted out a sex scene so Sara and Scott would get a show like the one they gave you?" I asked, not really getting what Elise was saying.

"Yeah, close enough," she said, "we were all pretty drunk and it seemed like the right kind of thing to do at the time. I think that's what Jeff's girlfriend would have done, at least if he had one and she was like me."

Elise looked at me with her innocent eyes. We didn't talk for a few minutes as I processed the thought of her pretending to have sex with Jeff in front of another couple.

"Are you mad?" she finally asked. "I think you're mad."

"Yeah. I'm pretty far from happy. It went way further than we agreed to and I didn't like sleeping in Jeff's bed while you guys had fun in here. But you never lie to me, and if you say everything was pretending and acting with Jeff I believe you and I'll get over it."

Elise's face lit up in a smile, "I'm so happy to hear you say that! I'm really glad you know I have no feelings for Jeff, you're the only man I want."

She held me close and we didn't say anything for a moment until she broke the silence. "Jeff, is pretty upset about everything that happened last night. He's been apologizing to me non-stop. I said I'd talk to you first and see how you were."

"I'll talk to him in a bit, as long as this was a one-time thing I think we can move on," I said.

"You're such a good friend and boyfriend. Can I ask just one more tiny favor?" Elise asked.

I raised my eyebrow, "another favor?"

"Please hide the rum," she said. "I think it clouds my judgement."

I laughed, "done."

"So, do you want to look at those pictures with me now?" she asked as my cock stirred.

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sennodensennodenalmost 2 years ago

Hey WordSculptor, respect!

WordSculptorWordSculptoralmost 3 years ago

Hey, ignore my previous comment. Being young and autistic I had yet to really adjust my suspension of disbelief for most erotica. Apologies for the overly negative tone I used at the time.

This is a fun series, thanks for your work on it.

WordSculptorWordSculptoralmost 4 years ago
I'm curious- help me understand

So this story isn't working for me at all, and has actually been kinda actively frustrating to read, but I'm still reading because I'm curious why this works for the author and the people enjoying it.

First and foremost, there's multiple characters who are just idiots- that's not really a criticism, because I'm assuming that's intentional. Perhaps people who grew up around a super hot but slow girl develop a fetish for that? It's not something I can personally relate to, but I'd be interested to hear why it works for others.

I tend to think of cheating stories as falling into either positive vibe stories (everyone involved is okay with it) or negative vibe stories, with my personal preference being the latter. This one seems like the latter (there is clear, knowing deception by virtually every character), but with characters trying to pretend its the former. The problem is, the pretending is completely unbelievable to me personally, so when the POV character goes along with it I lose immersion and instead I'm sitting there going 'oh come on, no one is that dumb.' Willing suspension of disbelief is fine line- once you lose it, it's very very hard to get it back.

The problem isn't that idiots don't exist in real life, it's that they don't tend to make good characters. People don't tend to think of themselves as idiots, so when the characters are continuously dumb, it makes it harder to relate to them, harder to be invested in them. I end up just not caring about these characters and their outcomes.

I'm very confused and I'm not even sure what I'm trying to ask here, but I guess mainly what I want to know is who is this working for and why?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Amazing

Awesome story, tbh it's just what I'm looking for. Elise loves Kevin truly and she does a few naughty exhibition too but, she doesn't sex, that's what makes this so interesting. Also I love the part where Elise only fucks Kevin and tease others.

Disappointed to see Shawn & Matt get away with dictating the truth or dare game and also making Sara and Scott stay knowing well that Kevin would be left all alone, it would have been great if Elise had shown some hate towards them later and also no more nude pics to em. Hahaha....

I've read most of your stories and it's really amazing, tbh there's one thing I didn't like, Ryan ass fucking her and that was also her first time. That was cheating, I don't consider others cheating but letting him stick his shaft nside her ass was like a let down imo. Nevertheless the story is AWESOME.... 5 stars ✨.

As long ass Elise doesn't fuck others and just continue to tease this will be awesome, her love to Kevin should remain true and they should marry and elise getting pregnant and finally she stops all of this slutty exhibitions and live happily with Kevin and her children.

Sailman66Sailman66over 6 years ago
Great series so far

Another great, well written chapter. I'm not buying the naive role of Elise anymore but that's just me and how I'm interpreting your story. As you mentioned in your earlier comment it's up to the reader to decide what did or didn't happen. Let's see where chapter 4 leaves me.

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