All Comments on 'Eliza'

erotic? If so you sre worse than the sick mind who wrote it

I don't think you missed a single one - the raped virgin who is multiorgasmic - the about to be raped virgin who gets uncontrolably excited at the prospect of sex - the inevitable holy trinity of fellatio, cunnilingus and intercourse - multiple acts of intercourse, including anal

And no plot worthy of the name - the entire course of the "story" was predictable from the beginning

I don't think you missed a single cliche - the raped virgin who is multiorgasmic - the about to be raped virgin who gets uncontrolably excited at the prospect of sex - the inevitable holy trinity of fellatio, cunnilingus and intercourse - multiple acts of intercourse, including anal And no plot worthy of the name - the entire course of the "story" was predictable from the beginning

don't read what you don't like. you're only being derogatory, non-constructive & an ignorant ass.

I love it when functionally illiterates are the only ones who like a story. That tells you exactly how well the text is written, that it can only attract a certain uneducated minority. LOL

and would have liked a little more including the ass rape part

There’s no storytelling here. We don’t know the protagonist. We don’t know what’s going on other than a quick and dirty rundown.

Decent description but ZERO character, scene setting or anything resembling writing.