All Comments on 'Elysium Ch. 01'

Really enjoy it so far. Looking forward for the next chapters

This chapter was a great start. I already loathe Doug. He is horrid and selfish. I really want to see where this relationship with Abi and Alex goes. Please update soon. I really like this story.

KC

Very interesting beginning. LOL! I was trying to look for page 2 only to realize hey, next chapter. Oh well, a little suspense is always good. That will give me the excuse to come check on this site everyday for the update :)

Good start. Alex sounds like a hot guy. Can't wait to see the next chapter. These two seem very interesting to watch how they'll eventually get together.

I notice that this is your first story here. An excellent start: an interesting situation, characters with interior lives ... looking forward to more.

I can't wait to know what happens next!?!?! Please post it ASAP

Please continue. I'm dying to know what'll happen btwn the two characters.

this is awesome and Doug sounds like a Class-A ass! lol

I loved the start and don't really care that much about Doug's pompous ass. He needs to be put in check and how does she or her family owe him a swift kick in the ass I would say is what they owe him.

Thank you for sharing I can't wait to read the rest.

I already don't like Doug!

A very impressive first effort. Glad it came to my attention.

Doug is an ASS!!! I hope whatever it is he has done for Abi's family, she can conclude soon, because he is going to be a spoiler to any type of relationship she has with anyone else. Especially Alex!