All Comments on 'Emily and Mark'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
like it

thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
great story

Another great story from Jena, hot,very hot and very well written. Cant wait for the next story. Steve UK

epiphany65epiphany65almost 15 years ago
Very warm, but not hot

I found this well-written and I liked the plot, but it would have been hotter if it had have been longer with more build-up and teasing and tension. Keep writing. I'll be looking forward to more of your stories.

KOTKKOTKalmost 15 years ago
Beautiful story.

It was really a beautiful story. Sometimes Love is more important than Lust. Thank you for the beautiful story & I'll be looking forward to read more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Another Success

This author promises erotic love stories-not just lust and she delivers every time. As usual Dee, a very nice story of two lovers. Will there be a sequel? Bill in FL

oldwayneoldwaynealmost 15 years ago
Short and sweet.

I liked it. Thanks for a good little tale.

Scotty209Scotty209almost 15 years ago
Unique approach

I really like the way this story developed. It is a very unique to approach a very hot subject.

realblueyesrealblueyesover 11 years ago
More real than you think

I know a couple who actually did this and are just blissful.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
typical

no background or character development and no end just a rushed middle and a waste of time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Nice Surprise!

Very tender story (although I don't find a grown man sucking on a lactating woman very appealing or sensual--actually kinda gross.) Great surprise ending!

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