All Comments on 'Emily's New Life Pt. 01'

by Oddasitis

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ptebadenptebadenalmost 7 years ago
Next chapter, please

I want to see what will happen this couple. I wish there will be hot women in the village.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Well done!

I cannot wait to read what's in store for Emily next! Thank you for a great read!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Please continue!

Excellent story, please, we need a sequel as soon as possible! : )

WilmagronWilmagronalmost 7 years ago

Yes, this was great! I was skeptical at first about the choice of letting the man be the narrator, but the way he reacted, disappionting her, only made sense from his perspective and turned out really well.

OddasitisOddasitisalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Hey folks! Thanks so much for commenting- it's really wonderful to get such a positive response, thank you! Pt. 02 incoming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Needing next chapter!

Loving this story! Keep the chapters coming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

:))) What a childish shit, for pimpled "teenagers" :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Pathetic garbage!

What crap this story is. No merit in it at all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Un hidden misogamy

Was - ok the set up had potential - for something sexual.

What we got instead was a story of prolonged rape - black guys with massive

dicks (who’d) have thought fucking her over and over and over but she

was drugged and loved it (the slut, I assume. Until finally the white guy who enjoyed

it all raped her too with his big but not that, and she oh no no no yeah give it

to me yea! And wow were you surprised after being mauled by croc sized

dicks, AT HOW TIGHT SHE STILL WAS.

Brother, can’t wait for your next story about using date rape drugs on campus!

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