All Comments on 'Emma Ch. 02'

by BANJAR

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Funny, hot but not too believable.

not to knock it, but one has to be really careful about returning to a vagina after being in the ass. Dangerous. Plus, there would be enough precum to knock up the girl before the main load arrived. I know it's fantasy, I do so approve, but some folks have a hard time separating the two, and could wind up in a mess. Just sayin. Would love to see another chapter though. As I said, it was fun!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
To: Funny, hot but.......

Fuck off! The story was written to excite and entertain. Go elsewhere to leave your editorial comments on hygiene. Thanks for the story, BANJAR. Anxiously awaiting chapter 3.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
nice story

A nice job on part 2. It would be really nice if in ch. 3 Bill got both Emma And Gloria pregnant at the same time. Better yet it would be perfect if Bill moved in with them and kept getting Emma pregnant every 9 and half to 10 months with another baby, until she turns 40 like her mother.

ChubbyLuvvaChubbyLuvvaalmost 6 years ago
Another good read.

Liked this too. Will it continue?

chytownchytownalmost 5 years ago
Damn !! That Was Hot*****

What a great and different storyline. I really liked and enjoyed this story. Thanks for sharing.

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