All Comments on 'Emmeline's Desires Pt. 03'

by KinkyMable

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small_town_girlsmall_town_girlalmost 10 years ago
wow. hot and messy... just the way i like it!

love this story already. thank you!

TornadoTysTornadoTysalmost 10 years ago
Girl is confused !

Good development from the situation of the night before.

I thought subs were not allowed to have more than 1 master ! ?

mel_pomenemel_pomenealmost 10 years ago
Excellent!

Another five stars, hugs, and a huge 'Thank you!'.

Shysub412Shysub412almost 10 years ago
Just keeps getting better

I like the way you portray here confusion over Benji and the need she has to be Dominated, it's hard to walk away from a relationship and a D/s relationship maybe harder as its not easy to put the trust needed in a new Dom quickly. I hope though she kicks him into touch as i feel she can do so much better.

Another 5 stars from this corner

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
More please?

This is phenomenally well written and executed and if you could write more that would be superb.

KinkyMableKinkyMablealmost 10 years agoAuthor
Hi

Thanks for all the compliments. I'm working on more now.

Sorry for any typos. I published the first three parts all at once without realizing my computer hadn't saved my edits.

collegegirlnerdcollegegirlnerdalmost 9 years ago

Noooooo. I love Carson. She can't go back!!! okay. onto the next chapter

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