All Comments on 'Employment Conditions Ch. 02'

by reavan

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Ugh...

Rubbish... poorly written and completely unrealistic... sure it's fiction, but even stroke stories need to be somewhat realistic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Expectations

The story has a very good premiss. There are so many ways to expound on it. I do wish you would continue. Being a Dom/Master I deffinatly enjoyed your story.

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