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by juanwildone

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Empty- A Good Title...

For a good start. But this story needs to be finished. You left nothing but a lot of loose ends that ALL need to be tird up so that a real "package" is "left on the stairs".

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
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wimpy shit.

Pjam1968Pjam1968over 1 year ago

Only a good start, the rest is lacking big time

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To all the authors I've stolen from - ya caught me red-handed - at least that's all I'll admit to having in my hand. None of these stories ever occurred - except between my ears, which I should probably go and clean now.