by LanceGoodthrust
all those people that said your story was wrong were willing to read it. It's listed under non-consent/reluctance what did they expect? A flippin fairytale?
Good story, fairly well written. Damn hot
Notice its in the non-consent section so don't know what the other idiots are whining about
And you also left a nice little reader-warning comment at the beginning. Makes you wonder if people actually read the stories or just make random comments in this category.
Really well written, and plausible. For all the complainers, what did you want, a nice rape where the rapee deserves it, or learns to like it? if you ask me, thatss sick.Who likes being raped?
Would have been better if you'd written more about her arousal. They would have made it hot. This was just rape. Non consensual erotica usually has reluctance turned into orgasm... Much better reading.
You need serious help with your rape fantasies. And I am a man.
I love rock concerts and i love non-consent stories, so i thought this would be down my street. It didn't disapoint!