All Comments on 'Erica's Twenty First'

Not a bad story, and certainly not a bad theme. I loved it. It was nice and dirty but there were some inconsistencies that made it a little hard to follow. At one point he was holding her nose so she'd open her mouth and then a thrust later she was unconscious? Other than small things like that the only thing that throws you off a little is there is no sense of a break when flipping from telling the story from Erica's point of view, to telling it from Steve's point of view. It all kind of blended together and you had to stop and figure out what had changed. Keep it up, and would love to see a sequel.