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"Why do you want to know, Erik? It didn't mean anything."
"I just want to know, Glenna. I'm not going to feel any hatred towards you or Roman."
"Six or seven times. Maybe more."
"That many? He must have been good."
She moved her hips slowly while they talked. "He was very good, but not as good as you. How about you? How many times did you have Roman's sister?"
He held still under her. "Only twice."
She circled and thrust her hips a little faster. "Me, too."
"You had her...too!" he said in shock, struggling to keep himself from moving, wanting her to do all the work.
She clenched her hands, her fingers digging into the muscles of his chest, thrusting faster, her climax nearly upon her. "She was...good. She prepared me...for Roman. I was like...a woman...possessed. Mostly I felt...like I was... drugged. The experience...was...unnnnn...reeeealllll."
Her cries of pleasure that filled the air, was music to his ears. "E-e-e-r-i-i-k!" As her hips bucked a few more times, his hands cupped her little buttocks, his fingers clenching in the soft mounds, coaxing her to keep moving until he was finished depositing his seed inside her. He prayed that Roman's seed hadn't taken root yet. He wanted Glenna's belly to grow large with his child. But if it was not his child that she was going to have, he would love it like it was his own, and most of all, he'll love it because it was Glenna's.
THE END
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 9 years agoI love this story, it made me orgasm more than once ;) And I love how the story ending was sweet, and romantic too.
Anonymousover 10 years agoI stumbled across your writing today (starting w/ the 2part "Victorian" style "Storm Of Love" in the "First Time" category), after reading it, "Jungle Fever", one other, & now this story - I declare myself "A Fan"! Your writing is insightful - especially about the emotions & desires that loneliness, trauma, & isolation with someone can create. You add texture and dimension to your stories through descriptions of the location and its history; though you have a deeper interest and knowledge than some of your readers; it brings greater enjoyment for others! Thanks again!
This site offers the chance for readers to leave"Comments". I think of this as an opportunity to express appreciation (for our entertainment - at no cost - from authors - who receive no payment) and occasionally a bit of "constructive criticism" to help them become even better writers. Let's stop trashing people & their hard work. Just because a subject (i.e. history or geography) is discussed, in these brief works of erotic fiction, DOESN'T mean they need be as accurate as A TEXT BOOK! Anymore than the sex described is a BIOLOGY lesson! IT'S FANTASY - Let's ENJOY IT!!!
kevkleinover 11 years agoAuthorBy the way, the story takes place in the mid 16th century AD. The Viking character is fictional. I like Vikings and they are interesting. That's why the female character is in the story more. Like all fiction, the story isn't meant to be real. Adding history makes a story more interesting. Thanks for the critique.
kevkleinover 11 years agoAuthorDo your own research. Gypsies have been in Scotland for at least 500 years. I do my research. And there are Gypsies in England. Have been for hundreds of years. And my story was not meant to be historically accurate, but there were Gypsies in Scotland and England hundreds of years ago, and still are.
Anonymousover 11 years agoJust because gypsies aren't on the books as being some where, doesn't mean they weren't. Learn your history; they are called a wandering people for a reason.
