All Comments on 'Escape though the Desert'

Waiting for more. 5 stars.

One correction POPPET is a term of endearment. Puppet is either a toy or an insult.

Natch

LOL thanks for the explanation. In my own language when the girl is petite and girly guys would say our word for "Little doll" so that is where I went astray :) Now to find out how I can edit / change it ...

In the meantime blame it on him being Russian and not a native speaker. ;)

Just use the actual word ("Kukla", and optionally use italics,) it will sound more authentic.

Very much enjoying it so far. Looking forward to where you'll be taking it

This is fascinating. Don't let the criticism stop you from writing. You know how to write an engaging tale :D

This is an engaging start to a promising story. It appears that English might possibly not be the author's native tongue, but that hardly detracts from the story at all. This is very pleasurable reading so far. Thanks for sharing another story with us.

This is not named part 1 but the story has 2 additional chapters :)

Very nice beginning! Sounds like there's going to be adventure, romance, and steamy scenes. I have a weakness for Russian heroes, especially military (if they're Spetsnaz, it's even better), or spy type guys. I also like I'll definitely read the remaining parts!