All Comments on 'Eva Discovered'

Well written, on a too familiar theme but with a twist. 'The author leaves us without an answer to his first comment, however. He states this incident changed his marriage, but other than getting the single response from her he doesn't give us a clue. Did he sneak around trying to catch her (the usual cliche) did she begin to remember she once had feelings for him (this romantic would have preferred that) or did they just begin swapping (no suggestion in the story, but a possiblility - another cliche that has gotten boring<in addition to disappointing>)

Yes, a well-worn story line, but as the previous reviewer stated, it had a nice little twist at the end.

I agree it left a lot unanswered at the end with the statement that the marriage had changed. But the author was right to leave it at that. Let the reader imagine what was meant. It isn't a documentary, it's a story.

Hopefully, the author will resist the temptation to go on and on and on about it in future "chapters" as so many on here do until the original characters are unrecognizable caricatures of human beings. "Eva Discovered, Ch. 26", Eva discovers threesomes with barnyard animals.

Leave it alone, Craig C. Move on to another story. Walk away winners.

Eric

Leave this story where it is.

Move on to another one.

Don't spoil this one with a boring swapping sequel.

I am an old romantic like the Troubador, let them enjoy each other.

My only worry is there was no explanation of why she suddenly became so slutty, and this reaction is NOT a normal female reaction when mad at her husband - despite what literotica authors might like us to think.

Why did she do it????

This is written well enough to seem real to me. If so, and there are following experiences of an erotic nature, I would really like to read about them. However, please keep things in the realm of the believable.

A well written tale supposedly true? I thought rather trite, one reads so many similar marital infidelities these days leading to bust ups, beat ups and even murders. the story ended a bit short leaving perhaps a chapter missing, but on reflection it's best left alone to pick up in the same frame of mind is very difficult 10/10

L Jem

She does this because she's angry with him. Now he has to wonder how many times has she been angry and, since she admitted she wanted to give the guy a blow job, what will she do in the future?? First chance, suck and fuck the next guy??

How can he trust her??

The fact you have honesty in your marriage is good. You can ALWAYS find a way to deal with the truth...but if you never KNOW what that truth is, it's impossible to work things out. Good luck, guy.

It is certainly a story of a marriage that has changed from intense passionate love of the other to “Hey friend want to go out and see what we can do to try and arouse each other” True passionate love is dead and is now an old friendship with benefits.<P>You don’t share your most valuable and irreplaceable thing on earth, but you will share a great thing that is always there to be used. It’s a shame when people give up on what once was irreplaceable and just say we are now more mature and bored, no you have lost what love is really about. I hope more people look at their partner and see the most earth shattering and mind bending person who still makes them feel like the luckiest person in the world that they are one.<P>Sad to me that so many people give up and say well we are still together it is just different now. The loss of passion in love is the greatest defeat.<P>These are just my feelings as I have always had that burning love, and still do after so many years<P>PT

But hey! At least he is honest about it!

another perverted, sick wimp

Old folks = 1*

Hope you get some extra on the side.. The wifey will be...

Yet another WACC hubby.

Yet another saw her whoring around and got a stiffy

Wow how new.

Does he have one everyday now because she will be fucking around everyday.

Wimpy fucking cuck writer! Just what this category needs.

He should continue to slink around...the little wuss! But when all is said and done...he is just another cuck on the pile!

Old whores are the best whores, and old ducks don't even care.