All Comments on 'Evelyn's Cruise Fun'

Racist AND gay. Piss off, wanker.

Would love to do Cleanup during gangbang on both her and them, also to be fluffed.YUM YUM YUM they could use me too, make me there bitch and use my ass-lists.

nuff said

Don't make a story. 1*

There is no resemblance in the style of the stories. The writing is as different as day and night. Offhand I would say this account has been hacked and some idiot is using it. It certainly isn't the original writer!

Just go straight to the source, why get all that icky pussy juice

Cum eating cuck crap. Waste of everyone's time.

A bad story...Just a small rectification: It's "Burkina Faso" and not Bikina Faso. 1*

illiterate shit.

I would never cheat on my husband ! But black men are just plain gross !!!

I mean any slut with a name like Kate and the numbers behind your name are the number of niggers you've serviced you dumb assed whore.

I can't get get that any right minded man would want another man to fuck his wife what ever size or colour cock.Those who appear to must be mentally deranged.

Thanks for anyone taking time comment whether that good or bad

To some of those commenting on subject of story like many stories on literotica it just fantasy so why read if content abhors you.

However to those who have commeted on the style of writing I really do appreciate your feedback.

Not a regular writer (mainly due to time constraints).My first submission was a collaboration & for my 2nd wanted try write on my own.

However I can see from feedback on style etc not seen as success.

I have noted such feedback and when write further would again look to take advice probably from an expierenced collaborator from literotica.

Thanks again though for taking time to comment I do sppreciste it

Seriously why cone here with your negative comments. Nobody cares about your negative comments so keep them to yourself. White women need a big black cock.

Just more racist bullshit

Another British take of cuck and whore adventures with a dark dildo named Pasqual.

Clearest…

A paragraph can (and usually does) have more than one sentence. As is, it is just disruptive. The paragraph should basically have a common theme. Exception is when one party says one sentence and then, a) either another person answers with one or more sentences; or b) the author provides some information (not conversation.)

Next …Thanks for not extending to the gang-bang! As presented, the couple can maintain their relationship without very much in negative changes on one or both sides. Hubby had been clear enough for Sweetie to actually consider the safety of both satisfying her curiosity and his fantasy. If they were to continue to invite Bull for the several remaining weeks, it would almost certainly create emotions and acts* that could bring friction. A gang-bang would be way too uncontrollable.

* like Bull & Sweetie take an hour just for themselves when Hubby went ashore by himself without Sweetie informing him.