All Comments on 'Evening Spectacular'

by dirtyjoe69

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SeniorcitizenSeniorcitizenalmost 18 years ago
Very good

Very well written, apart from some spelling mistakes. I enjoy the first person style as you do. You may like to check out my first offering,'Seduction of Innocence', which uses a similar style.

RockerJustinRockerJustinalmost 18 years ago
Beautiful

Loved how you wrote this one! The back and forth was quite interesting!

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