All Comments on 'Everlasting Jawdropper Ch. 01'

Interesting story line. Certainly over-the-top impossible, but this is a fantasy site, correct? Looknig forward to part 2. Thanks!

it is an interesting twist to the mundane stories that have cum up. looking forward to where this is leading to

I hope you write fast.

The sooner these two are rutting like wild pigs the better! great start.

Original, unique, creative! A breath of fresh air compared to the usual stories here. Sure, its improbable, but that is what story telling is all about. Please give us a sequel.

Knock her and your little sister up

Good start! Really enjoy the growth aspect. More growth of cock, balls, and sperm production!

Excitedly awaiting part two hope it's just as good as the first one....hurry up you've got us dying of anticipation.

Not that bad. i will have to see how the other chapters go. please hurry with them

Please, sir , I want some more! I think Mom may have said that too.

Stop reading this and start writing!

Thanks for a great fantasy

I am hoping that there will be a second installment to this story. I am very much wanting to see where it will go.

Love it that was hot love stories like that is there going to be a 2nd

LOL

Mom quivering on her son's cock and having orgasms for 30 minutes straight. Thanks

I like this. It's different, a little twisted, and nicely kinky. I do hope you write another chapter someday.

Looking forward to when some more "stuff" happens to go around.

Good story, but some names and some elaboration would help.

Please continue this story. I cant wait to read what happens next.

It's funny that a story with a scientific base could be so ridiculous.

is there a second chapter on this one??