All Comments on 'Excuse Me Miss... Ch. 05'

Thanks for writing the end! You had many of us hanging on waiting the outcome!

This was a good story. Well written, in general. Held my interest. You did one thing that surprised me, which will sound petty, but I write from experience and from a man's viewpoint.

I'm afraid you may have underestimated the pure joy of being with a lover -- especially a "new" lover -- and she takes your cock in her mouth and sucks on it until you come, and then swallows your juice and moves on to fucking you -- if, I say, you have had that experience, I should think you would make more of an "occasion" over it in your story than you did. Twice she sucked him off to a climax, and you sloughed over it as though it were no big thing. I think you should have given it more acknowledgement than you did. My only "complaint."

Is a bitch. And always has been. Great Story. Thanks.....

Very nice story.

5 * for you

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

was leaving the story but on 2nd thought I suspected where it might lead...glad I stuck it out!

except that I'm having trouble figuring out why she was still having trouble settling on him after her cousin's wedding. A little nervous is one thing. Breaking up with him like that, without discussing it, doesn't seem plausible.

If she really meant, I need your help but that's still the end of it, she needed to say so. Good job with Hallie, BTW. She is entirely plausible.

As for Joe, he's all too plausible. One of my aunts had a husband who, it developed, had been screwing other women during the honeymoon. I hope Joe had fun getting his car running.

I would like to add my voice to the crowd concerning the quality of this story. I loved the characters and the pace of the story. I couldn't stop reading until I was finished. I know you wrote this story awhile ago, but it is still one of the best I have read on this website. Thanks for your time and imagination.

That was a thoroughly enjoyable series, I'm a bit fan.

I almost passed by this series. However, something told me to click. Amazing story. Glad I clicked. May have try forgetting my metro pass. Lol

Hahahahahaha That was an excellent story, but you almost lost me at the end when she asked him to leave. Men don't chase women around anymore, we have had enough of that. I can do bad all by myself, I don't need any help. Glad I looked forward and then stepped back to the story.

Still a great story! Even has a "happy ending". Thanks,

Loved the characters!