All Comments on 'Expanding Our Horizons Pt. 01'

You have a great beginning here, neighbors are always fun when the setting is right.

One suggestion, do a little more proofreading, that will make it just that much more readable.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Like drmac100 said, you need to proofread. I'm still not sure if the neighbor's name was Matthew or William, as you switched back and forth. Good start otherwise, though!

you say goodbye on your way out of the door and the relationship.

I completely agree, a fabulous part 1.

I look forward to reading part 2 and, hopefully, many more parts.

I see this is a few yrs old now, will there be a part 2?

Seems a shame to let it end there, you have the characters development started pretty well......

Or William? That does mess with the flow