All Comments on 'Exploring Sex Frontier's Edge'

to rent a porn DVD?...... anyway, how do you know one of those guys your beloved Ned wants to watch you with didn't have the HIV? ..... wait, I guess he's willing to take the same, well, ALMOST the same risks, by slurping the yummy stuff out of you after such romantic fluids exchanged with romantic strangers (who, of course, always say they are "safe!").... We know,,, it's only fiction, because in real life people can't be this dumb, right? LOL

<p>No matter how hard you try to dress it up, a desire for emasculation and humiliation as a prerequisite for sexual arousal is symptomatic of a psychiatric disorder. Since that's the way Earnie starts off this (whatever it is) I thought I’d address the issue too – right up front.</p>

<p>Earnie feels qualified to make his remarks concerning the darkness in his mind and how badly he needs to be humiliated by watching a real man take Earnie’s wife. But he makes his remarks in an exceptionally poor manner. I can’t remember the last time I saw dialogue that was as stiff and formal as what Earnie has written. Put succinctly, and in far less pretentious prose than Earnie elects to use, the dialogue sucks. If Earnie were writing in 1852, his grammar and dialogue would make sense, but it’s laughable in the modern era.</p>

<p>But...I could be wrong. Earnie might just not have any skill. He might not be attempting to imitate writers long dead. For instance, I can’t find any ancient dictionary that would tell me what “fantasise” means. Well, heck, if you look at the punctuation in the “story,” it kind of sucks too.</p>

<p>Shoot, all in all, this “story” isn’t worth very much. Perhaps the “writer” is practicing to enter that 3rd grade writing contest he didn’t win the first time around.</p>

<p>Ron123XYZ@foreveranonymous.naturally</p>

The lifestyle of the characters. The problem is with your writing. I have seen more erotic jack and jill nursery ryhmes...Oh darling do you want to fuck him...hnhh hnhh. Oh yes I want to fuck him....Then fuck him...my wife wants to fuck you...well alright I'll fuck her....SHIT

Law One of Erotic Fiction: Never, never, ever mention fish in the same context as sex between a man and a woman unless you get off on unfortunate mental images.

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The writing was so-so. The plot, if you can call it that, wanders. The characters aren't realistic since I don't believe men with healthy libidos need to be humiliated and cuckolded to get a hard-on. A wife who gets fucked by men other than her husband is called a slut. If you're married to a slut, here's some advice: get a divorce.

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I must admit that I couldn't finish reading this thing. I made it three-quarters of the way through before I had to call a halt. This is fiction, all right, bad fiction. Here's the Dreaded Double Goose Egg of Egregious Excrement and I thank you for your effort.

for me! str8 woman here. This is a fantasy of mine as well. Bravo! It sure 'satisfied' me! :)

You describe lack of arousal as non-interest in the singular aspect of marriage. Further you push male watching, self humiliation, self disrespect and wife pimping as a significent improvement to your spousal relationship.<P>

Assuming you are really male, have you given up normal or abnormal sexual relationships for yourself with others as well or would that be unfair given your new proclivity for being a pimp for your partner in life? If you feel that is normal or acceptable long term even as your fantasy than I wonder why everyone else doesn't marry their whore.<P>

Why aren't there a high percentage of whores with wedding bands and their husbands in the room watching bigger cocks take wifie poo higher than they ever had or will?<P>

By now you must acknowledge your situation is a numb jaded one where little excites you. Further, your pimping and watching will wear on your lovely wife as she really can't figure out why you value her and most of all yourself less than you did when you were her sole protector and provider.<P>

Soon the laughter of her and her cock will grow as you sit in the corner and jackoff to something you once did but won't anymore as you don't and can't respect yourself anymore. How sad and wimpish she and he now regard you as do your family, neighbors and grimly smiling friends(?).<P>

Now thats exciting eh wimp? Can gender change be far behind or has it already begun. Get some help soon earnstly in need. Your 2 fans won't miss you.

I really enjoyed the part referring to the pleasure of entering her vagina after Marc has filled it with cum. I know from experience how exciting that is. I have fucked my wife on numerous ocassions after our friend has filled her pussy with his hot sticky cum. It's awesome.

Would he win church's ideal cuckold award? Would you get the award for cheapest whore? Among nature's lowest lifeforms.