by Contrasting
At last, Sonny has found his balls again and I'm smelling something delightfully evil in the air for Ms. D.D. Hamilton! I can't wait to read when he's finally in charge, with her begging to give him what he wants! I was a very leery at first when she had effectively claimed his balls and kept them in her purse but he seems to finally have a handle on things once again, as he should! Keep up the good work!
First very enjoyable read, I like the direction Sonny is going with Double D.
Second, getting Ahmay to warm to fucking Sonny is good, hope to see Rodney added to the group with Ahmay going on the Airtight Express.
Third, glad to see the story line on Sean's mother Lydia is progressing with a partial reveal as to how Lydia will officially become one of the MILFs.
Keep up the work.
"D Debras ass, sound as a blue chip stock. " worth a 5 just for that comment.
Please note, D Debra is blonde with an 'e' as is her hair. Chris and his hair are blond without an 'e.' One of the very rare examples of gender in English.
I keep saying after every chapter but I hopp that Hamilton chick gets driven nuts by sonny and then ignore her..... the rest is all good, would like him to get involved with his sister again and his mom, on the the next chapter
Why all the big words? More normal people read your writing than very educated people. alacrity, obeisance, quiescent, suffused, consummated, forbearance, self-deprecating, thumbed
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