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All Comments on 'Extra Credit Ch. 01'

by Always_want_more

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Good but careless

I agree with the previous person... it was a good story but the spelling mistakes distracted me. Next time, ensure that you have several people proofreading your work before you submit it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
You really need a proof reader/editor.

Not a bad first story, but was distracted by misspellings, incorrect use of words, etc.

X S sexX S sexabout 19 years ago
Good content

Well written--like a first person experience. Would like to hear more of your experiences.

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