All Comments on 'Extra Lessons'

Nice premise. Nicely told. Needed slower pace and step-by-step descriptions and dialogue as build up to the fuck. Keep writing.

Wow. For your first try at writing, i have to say this was hot. it had me creaming in my pants from the very begining. keep on writing.

all i have to say is that; being your first story, you have done really well. the characters and plot are well written, and the descriptions are so vivid, i can almost imagine myself in that setting. The story had me wanting to read on from the very begining. i loved the way it ended, and the way you described the sex. i was stroking myself and came so hard.

this is a well written, story, with plenty of hot action that made me cum so hard. keep writing

i loved this. you had me fingering my pussy from the start. you made me squirt so much. keep on writing. you have a real sexy style of writing, and id love to read more. you have me begging for more

Loved the story, very sexy. Look forward to the next!

Quite delicious...

you have such a sexy style of writing. i am lusting over you right now. judging by the way you write, i would love to fuck you and make you come.