All Comments on 'Face to Face with the Full Moon'

This is going to be a really great story, cant wait for the next chapter! (Too short, please write soon)

True, this chapter was a bit shorter than i would have liked. But you are off to a really great start and so far your writing skills are good. Please continue. i am very curious where this leads.

Good story line,just seems a little rushed,the chapters could be a little longer with some background of the people? involved.

I'm assuming English is not your native language because you don't use past/present/future tense correctly. Get an editor. Your story is good but a bit rushed.

I need more, dear writer. Keep going!