by sylentpoet
on your first story submission, well actually first two since chapter 2 has also posted. With the exception of a few typos this is an interesting story. I like that you have added Irish lore to your story. No I'm not Irish, but Ireland does still have a mystery about it and will make a nice backdrop. I'm headed for chapter 2 now.
Again congratulations on your first story submission.
It love this fiction, mainly because I can relate to Dillon =)
(well not as attractive lol, but lack of interest in woman and too focused on everything else).
I can't wait to see how this progresses!
Thank you for creating this =)!
I love this chapter if the other chapters are like this one this will be a great story. I love the part about the father thats going on today and its sad. Love it.