by sylentpoet
I almost expected Dillon to revert to a child instead Sienna becomes an adult. Of course if I had thought this through I would have realized a couple Fae children may not be the best start to your story. I look forward to reading chapter 3 and will watch for it to post.
I just read parts 1 and 2. For stories like this I usually wait to part 3 to write a comment. However, you already have me hooked. I will look forward to part 3.
I like the way you wrote this chapter. Very good writing, and I like that you based this in Ireland. :) Can't wait for part 3.
"i hope that his faint was because of something she did, not just for the hell of it."
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