All Comments on 'Fahrenheit in Celsius Ch. 01'

You write confidently. Keep it up.

That was incredibly well-written! I can't wait for more!

Celebrity stories are often underated,I think its because the characters are not that well known other than in America or Uk.On the subject of UK,there are not that many stories that feature some of our lovely women.

great story cant wait for the rest of it

I really enjoyed the flow of this story, and the characters' actions work very well with the narrative they are drawn from. It's easy to take characters from a game or established story and move them around like cutouts for your own fantasies, but you do much better than that. Good work, and I still would like to see a chapter 2 for this storyline, or see the erotic lives of other characters from Spira explored.

Okay. Here's the thing.

Much to my own dissapointment, there's very little chance that I can really post the rest of this story on this site. The moderators don't like they way Rikku gets brought back into the story (because I made the mistake of giving her the correct age. I had to point out that she wasn't involved in order to get this chapter up). And that bit is pretty much the entire basis of the next section.

Anyway, if you want to read the rest of what I've finished; you can either send me a direct message, or there is a different site which has the total of my current writings (under the same username and story title). To find this search for 'Fan Fiction'; which is what this techincally is. You should be able to find it fairly easily.

I'm sad you can't have a part 2. Then again, a lot of FF girls are technically underaged. Still, quite enjoyable.

As is, the SITE could get into trouble for the underaged sexual flirting with Rikku in this tale.

quite supremely awesome, more is definitely needed, by the way, if you know where more material concerning the deity that is square enix can be found, PLEASE tell me, as the material on this site could be held in the palm of one hand.

Hey just found this, Extremely well written and I encourage you to continue!

--9black

Had to get another account couldn't remember the other one. just here to say your work is amazing.

I can't wait for the next chapter :)