All Comments on 'Fallen Angel Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Great title. Ugly story. The writing is stiff and too awkward to enjoy. It's unrealistic and ugly. I'm a practitioner, a D/s switch and this is so untrue. We're both women but the similarity ends there. I'm disgusted by your portrayal of a female sub.

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