All Comments on 'Falling Hard Ch. 14'

This story is on Chapter 14 and Virta is still a virgin? Are you kidding? Honestly, you could have done without half the stuff on Mick and Mandi. Who cares? And then Athan and Virta barely had anytime. Please focus on Athan and Virta. It's their story, right?

I love that you've added Mick and Mandi into the mix - I hope you continue another line of stories with them! Keep up the good work - I can't wait to read more!!

I'm really glad to see this chapter --I've been waiting for it! I'm so glad Mick is here. Can't wait to see how it all works out, and anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

I think you are doing a good job with this story, and i hope you continue it for a long, long time. I enjoy the time taken to slowly build up the characters, letting the suspense build and the characters grow. Keep up the good work.

I'm happy I found your story, it's everything I looked for in a story. I hope you post ch.15 soon.