All Comments on 'Falling Hard Ch. 19'

Yay!!!!!!!!!! One of my fave stories!!!!!!!!!!!!1

I know it can be hard with "real life" going on, but thanks for sticking with the story. It was a neat idea and I'm so glad you finished it. :)

The idea for this story was so very original that I had to read it. And I'm so glad I did because it's a fantastic story. The story flowed smoothly from one section to another, and I felt as if I knew the characters very well. Thank you very much for writing the story and finishing it. For me it was a perfect ending! Bravo!! Melanie

Great story. One of my favorites. Loved the whole "reversal" of heaven and hell from traditional views

When I first read the story, I fall in love hard. It's unique and it's so intriguing! Please, write more! =]

Not a literary classic perhaps, but a blockbusting story, well told. I loved, liked, or hated the characters.

Thank you!

I absolutely adored it! I'm so glad I found this story.

I can't believe I never commented on this! I have a confession. I keep constantly rereading this story and before everyday when the story was still ongoing, I'd check everyday if you have updated. Sorry for forgeting to post comments on the past chapters, but I wanted to say sorry for being a silent reader and thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story.

Oh my gosh, you had me glued to my computer screen, and simultaneously managed to give me a terminal case of procrastination. I couldn’t do any work until I had finished the story; absolutely riveting but I have to tell you, you scared me with the prologue, I honestly thought that the daemon would turn on Virta, and it was about to break my heart. I am super glad that the story ended the way it did; I don’t think I could have withstood such a tragedy had Athan turned on Virta like you led me to believe in the beginning. Please write more!!!!!!

I just sat and read this entire story, start to finish, and just wanted to thank you for sharing. It was wonderful.

that is perhaps the best short story I've read in years. You should seriously consider going into a professional line with your literary skills!! Very very impressive!

loved it lol GREAT story awsum job

i love this story so much, it kept me reading well into the morning, thank you so much for posting this wonderful story

I love love love this story! I kinda want to see a story on Mandi and Mick..

What a fabulous story! I loved it :)

It's a great story! And you created your own world, you didn't try to conform to any notion that we have of heaven and hell. I think that made your story real to readers

A slow start but a great story and a brilliant end

I liked that story so much I can't even explain it!!! It gave me such a good feeling inside with the suspense and drama and all the right elements!!!!

Loved this story!