All Comments on 'Family'

Joannie shocked the crap out of her brother.

Now he is going to make love to his Mom,

A nice surprise.

Need another chapter soon!

I liked the story but it was difficult sometimes figuring out exactly who was talking.

Be quick with part two please.

Joannie is 24, her mother is 22 years older, at 44?

...really only works if your name is Damon Runyon.

They'll do it every time

OK. So what was the final disposition of the puppies? Was he able to use them as leverage to score with anyone? . . . .