All Comments on 'Family Affairs'

by oddsandends

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Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesalmost 8 years ago
That he was her father became obvious long before it was "revealed".

And the story started to go downhill after that point. You might have still kept my interest if her mother had decided there was enough "Uncle Dad" to go around and they turned it into a threesome.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great

I do have to agree with the above comment. However, I still think you have a chance to play the story out by creating a fully family of incest.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Nitpicky, but...

She is 18, it is 2016. Flashback references DVD. 1997 not many people had DVD's. Not bad though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Ferris Wheel

Someone please tell this author it’s Ferris Wheel, not Farris Wheel

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