All Comments on 'Family Camping Trip'

really liked and enjoyed it please write more such stories or extend this one with more family members

Didn't like the cheating on dad but ok otherwise

i hope for more ch.2 please!?

Damn good story more please ....

Well that was a good read. Good dialogue & storyline.

Very enjoyable read with plenty of avenues ahead to take the story. Surely, dad deserves some action!

Very good story. Great dialog and all. Looking foeward to mors of your work.

What a great story and well written! Hope there is a chapter 2.

Does anyone know the name of the story where son intetresd in his mom who is a Doctor but both of them don't recognize each other because the parents split when he and his sister were young. The son went with the dad and the baby sister went with the mom years the daughter likes her teacher who is her father, eventually all four of them get together after realizing who each other were.

Definitely hope to see a second and more chapters. Too often, writers feel the need to include forced sex or violent tendencies in stories/videos that are available. I never had to hit or slap or do anything like that to make my girlfriend/wife happy. I look forward to seeing the continuation of this story, possibly even beyond the vacation when we fined out that the three girls just happen to live close enough to visit sometime in the future. Maybe we could see some interaction with the girlfriend too in addition to mom and sister and 'new friends'.

Thank you for an enjoyable read ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Very well written. Hope there is more to come!

This was a good story hope there will be more.

To the reader ManoBlue the name of the story you were asking about is Family Reunion

byEroscott©

Give Trevor just the beginnings of a bit of chest hair -- make the sex more exciting for him and Jenny!

Stopped reading after 38DDD.

There has to be more fucking and the other three girls need a stiff rod to keep then happy! What is next family orgy? Does anyone get pregnant? More please

Oh yes 4 girls 1 guy 1 tent! All night!

Thanks Anonymous!!!

Please keep this story going. It's just starting to get really good.

Loved it. Hope we get to see what happens at Brice National Park

A little long ,but o' boy what a ride. F irst his sister, then his mom, Then three strange girls. What a camping trip that was. All this right under dads nose,who did the driving. Good Read keep goin

I have to say, after years of loving this site, you my friend have really taken it to the next level. I think this is the best story I have read on here. WOW. JUST WOW.

Thoroughly enjoyed it if all a bit rapid. That spoils the build up

You should show ( or make clear in words) where there is a break in the narrative. It would do no harm to be clearer about who is speaking. It's guesswork a lot of the time. And sometimes actually confusing.

Another chapter very soon please.

Loved it. I'd give it a 6 if I could. Hope there is more to follow with this story line.

Triple D's?! Next cup size after Double D's is E! So, that and forgetting to distinguish between who was speaking a few times cost you one star.

Triple D's?! Next cup size after Double D's is E!

It would be nice if Anonymous would learn to leave their real identity so that they could be responded to.... especially when they dont know what they're talking about. For the record... if you read the label on the inside of my wife's Victoria secret bras, you will find the size tag 38DDD. While some manufactures use the E designation it is far less common that the DDD designation. by definition for a 38" band size a DDD will have a bust size of 42 1/4 to 43"

Love the story line with its twists and turns ... made me very horny! Definitely great fantasizing material! 8-P

That there should at least one more chapter of story to tell with this fun family

What is next? You have your sister and 3 hot coeds as well as a horny Mom.

We need more chapters!!!

The Fuck - O!

Loved the story but D and double D's get over used and even boring when used on every female. Please change it up a bit.

Ready for chapter 2

Actually a bit too far

Wishing I had an experience like that, god damn

Fuck yes

I loved it!!! Of course, I would love to be in a situation like that. It would be wonderful if there was porn videos with THIS amount of content instead of the same ole “I need some help with something, and now I’m plowing you”. Keep up the tantalizing work!

I hope it is something in the water.

I like the pacing, I liked the description and locale. The old-enough brother and sister I could buy as well, within the confines of the story, and I thought the "bigger than Mark and Donnie" reference was hilarious. I suppose the next step is for Jenny to seduce dad and close the circle. My only bugbears were a couple of present-tense/past-tense hiccups and one scene where it could be made more clear it was Dad who was speaking (going to fetch the ice water while Mom and Trevor went to have the shower) - having to work it out jarred the pacing a little.

Otherwise, this one is abbasolutely a keeper! Thanks for sharing.

If only life was really like this for this horny old man. I'd LOVE to get some young...or old pussy like that.

Thanks for writing. I'm looking forward to more.

with the good sister being so open I'm surprised that the brother is not enjoying all three of her openings

Mother daughter I know brother fucking his sister she must of gotten pregnant

Got more than a couple hard ons reading this story!!!

wow - 5 stars. wish i enjoyed the great outdoors!!!

Makes me want to go outdoor exploring more often.

Great read

That's all ... just stupid.

btw, it's Bryce.

Great story

I really hope you don't include the dad. For me, that always spoils it. It's much hotter when the dad is clueless while his wife is fucking their son.

As nature intended ALL out in the open

Fantastic.

Great story... well written with nice pacing. Looking forward to reading the rest of the series.

I swear to God if this man says uh huh one more fucking time I’m gonna lose my shit. SAY SOMETHING ELSE!!! Otherwise good story, keep it up I’m trying to endure long enough to get through to the cousin part I just heard about

Great story - one of those "Wish I was there" stories. QUESTION: Just when does Grandmother show up. ;-)

(9/3/2021) Outstanding! loved every bit of this story. I love harems as long as our hero can satisfy his women. I know some would disagree but I would rather not have dad join in the fun. I'm sure that wifey is more than enough for that old guy. Hope he stays clueless. I believe there may have been a couple of word errors; but nothing that would take anything away from this enjoyable read. This story goes on my favorites list. 5 stars of course.

It is Bryce Canyon. Please do your research of a notable sight before submitting your story.

Surfing through authors and stories, i found this one and i thought it looked promising since it had a rating of 4.72 for chap. 1. But this story is just Goofy. Sister went from Cold to Hot within a paragragh?? I couldn't get passed the the 1st two pages. Not realistic, sexy or erotic. But i will not hurt it further by rating it.

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Loved it! Well done. This whole series has become a favorite of mine.

Steamy and slutty, and fairly free within the family....

Amazing hot story. They just need to get Dad involved also. I'm sure he would love to get with his daughter and vice versa.