by MishaPearl2
Good story, nice pace. I need also to comment that I really appreciate the care that you took in either checking your writing or using a proofreader. Thank you!
Thanks BAW. Thanks, Regrets.
I am my own proofreader and that is sometimes challenging. :-)
Keep reading. Keep commenting. It's how I get better. MP2
I'm glad Claude woke up!! although it was very short, it's a very erotic chapter. well written.