All Comments on 'Family Development Ch. 07: Surprise!'

CLAUDE JUST FUCKED KRISTY IN THE SHOWER AND HE LEAVES HER IN THE SHOWER, TURNS THE LIGHT OFF AND GOES INTO HIS BEDROOM AND FUCKS HIS MOTHER AND SHE'S GROANING AND MAKING ALL SORTS GUTTURAL "OH I'M BEING FUCKED SO GOOD BY MY SON" SOUNDS AND KRISTY IS IN THE SHOWER OR IN HER BEDROOM BY NOW AND SHE DOESN'T HEAR OR WONDER WTF? WELL, I GUESS I GOT A REFRESHER ON UPPER TORSO ANATOMY IN THIS STORY! lol

I STILL LOVE THE STORY AND HAVE GIVEN A 5 STAR AND FAVORITE STORY TO EVERY CHAPTER!

It's a big house... :-)

Glad I could help you "BONE UP" on your anatomy. MP2

a little short. probably would have fit better at the end of chapter 6 and made it a more interesting evening - and a longer chapter 6. But its a great, fun, well crafted tale. 5 stars. very interested to know where its heading!

Very observant... I think I did break this off from Ch 6. Not sure, though. Thanks for the rating and the comment. Glad the suspense is holding! MP2 :-)