All Comments on 'Family Foursome Ch. 03'

You could have done some much more with this story but chose to end rather abruptly and taking the easy way out.

I liked your story and was a good read right up til the last two paragraphs. After all that happened, Sarah just up and decides "I don't like this anymore so I'm turning in the father for rape". Kinda way past left field, isn't it?

Well, shit...

This is usually used for people who have been involved in money laundering, gun running, drug trafficking, murderand other serious crimes. I don't think any prosecutor would use it for a witness in a consensual (non-forced) incest trial. So this added plot point completely ruins this story for me.

Jack should have gotten married to Sarah. Then gotten all three of them knocked up.

what the fuck did you do at the end man?

why ruining good story? sorry 1*

What a bitch. Great story!