All Comments on 'Family Jules'

General observations after a second reading: Never did explain what precipitated her homeless status - Red hair and blue eyes? Not likely - OK, we've already got the picture so no need for them to continually keep referring to each other as 'sister' or 'brother' - She comes across as some sort of a needy ne'er-do-well bitch - "... exposing her bosom". Damn, bosom is such an archaic term. Try tits, or worst case, breasts - Yech. I guess ass licking just ain't my bag - Unless I missed it he never got around to straight-up fucking her - From your very accurate locale descriptions I assume you might be a Seattle resident -

Loved it, except the parts about anal and baby murder.

(11/30/2023) Well, this is going to take a while. First, I’m not into feet as in sucking toes. I’ve done it, but meh.., not something I enjoy doing. Two, I’m definitely NOT into rimming. I’ll give her the Aussy kiss day and night, but rimming, nope. Never done it and never will. Now these are my preferences. If those fetishes were spelled out in the tags I would most likely not have read this story. As for the story itself, I found the character of Damon to be very light, bland, and selfish. Yes, he lusted after Jules but did he actually love her? When she gave him the silent treatment all he cared about was himself. He wanted her to leave and stop his, I guess, discomfort. I felt much more for Jules. She seemed real and had empathy. Another thing that bothered me was the discussion of children. His friend's children bother him so he doesn’t want any of his own. It just ticks me off when I hear about how couples don’t want to have children because it cramps their style or they feel that they should not bring more children into this so-called messed-up world. Of course, It’s every couple's right to not have children, their preferences, their life. But I find it so selfish and arrogant. Now you can use the excuse that they shouldn’t have children because they are blood-related, and there can be very deleterious effects on the offspring. But the odds of their children having any defects are almost as low as a non-related couple. They would both need to have the common gene that causes disorders like Down syndrome or Cystic Fibrosis. And it takes several generations for effects like limb malformations, and disorders of sex development to manifest themselves. I can say she could have done better than Damon. I tried very hard to like this story because I liked the premise but I had to bail in the middle of page five. The story was very good regarding grammar and structure. I gave this story three stars because I didn’t want to be a dick. Most stories I've read on this site are pretty good.

A nicely written story which I truly found most enjoyable. There was on element that piqued my general curiosity though. Why is it that a predominant number of writers of this genre seem to give the female protagonists red hair? (Just curious)

I think not.

Not only was she a redhead goddess, not only was she the big sister he's been in love with his whole life. Not only was she the most perfect angel ever created. But she also let's me tongue that perfect ass that haunts my dreams? This is the best story ever written!

Wonderful!!! I love to read LOVE stories. Relations don't matter among consenting adults, just relationships. Thank you for sharing this with me/us!

Solid. Great writing.

Its a great start. I'm looking forward to the next 10-12 chapters.. your writing is well done an I can't wait for the rest of the chapters. Please don't pull a "Xarth "and leave the stories 1/2 written.

Personally I think you have a great story start and I'd like to see the characters developed a

Thanks for sharing this story with the rest of us 👍...

Loved the story as it was well written and flowed smoothly. This is easily one of my favorite stories, I only wish the author would have continued the story a little bit further to them taking up the role of a married couple, having kids and the happily ever after. Well Done 5 stars.

Nice Story

It was a little ling to get to the hot spots, but it didn’t drag. I was expecting her to need a little dominance from a safe place, but she ended up having to practically beg any real sex. Two comments on the best hot spots. 1. When she asked him to talk her through the blowjob I thought there was an opportunity for some sexy banter and/or taunting (perhaps she masturbated and he calls her on it). 2 The ass licking absolutely priceless. My experience tells me he would be so hard and leaky from making cum that way, he wouldn’t need her mouth or lube. And the fact that she asks for it from the start and he made her cum with his tongue first should have shifted him to lead from there (what if he started questioning her about *liking it* up the ass? Or gets her to declare her need for this regularly). Of course taunting during sex generally leads to retreating back to safe and loving reflection after sex. Good work and thank you.

Man this is one of my favourite stories maybe even my favourite, nothing complicated no drama just simple story of two people finding something in each other, i keep reading this story every once in a while and i can't get enough of it. Wish that you continued writing stories in this category, thankyou for posting this amazing story. I found this story because i started looking for stories thru tags and thankgod i found this one. I am sure this story would in top list if re-posted, and i would like this to be reposted as well. And i am sure there will less people crying about anal as well, can you believe that this guys are reading incest stories and are pissed of about anal sex lol. Thanks again for posting amazing story.

Felt sorry for Jules. Bro was dumber than a box of rocks. Anal? I'm not into gay crap, YUK! otherwise very good.

A great and plausible story of wonderful platonic sibling love slowly transitioning into deep romantic love. My favorite type of incest story. The characters are smart and likeable and talk like normal people. The story is unrushed without dragging, and kind of sweet. Anyway, I've added it to my favorites list - 5 stars.

but, two loser...

Just for me... Blow jobs MEH! Anal? No thanks I'm not gay or even close to Bi. The rest was very nice. I know the exact place made for a dick and cum, but I also love eating pussy. I've always felt my pleasure was pleasing the woman, so I do that. So thank you Author.

I rly cant relate to our "male" hero. Hes sister is supposed to be one step from homeless and yet he clearly prefers her to keep relying solely on him. He not only does not help her getting any kind of job but even directly opposes the very idea her even trying in that direction. No kids ever too. Apart from the starting shower she does not behave like a almost homeless person to me. Shes supposed to be older than him too. In real life this situation would cause her depressed real fast assuming she would not be depressed already. No job, no objective in life, nobody rly needs her and no kids - no future. Apart from that our "male" is so meek like we talking about 12-15yo virgin. Cant speak up for himself letting her rant while he keeps quiet. Ugh i must admit it was cool idea for a story but i like it still to be somewhat belivable. This here is pretty far from it. 3/5 just because idea behind this story seem cool to me.

I absolutely loved it!

You have such a gift at writing a good brother/sister story but why on earth is this your only incest taboo submission? Please continue with more...You have a tells lent fir it.

Very well written and I enjoyed the slow build up to them having sex. My only complaint was how you made him out to be so unable to speak to her.

This is the third time I've read this wonderful story. I realize it is entirely fictional yet it reads as if it were, or at least could be, true. Put differently, it has a most palpable credibility. I can really see this happening, especially what followed the conversation between Damon and Tom, (the What is it that women want?) exchange. It opened Damon's eyes, allowing him to finally appreciate Jules in her full womanhood. It was at that point that they ceased being (merely) brother and sister. And the sex wasn't bad either. Take it from an inveterate ass licker, it rocked!

The buildup, the dialogue and everything is great its more than decade this story was published lol i just found it, my feedback wont matter much but great story!.

This was a five star story the second they didn't want kids; so many otherwise fantastic stories are marred on the last page by a screaming shit factory.

Of course, the story is great around that too, and bigdaddyg's got his head further up his ass than an ostrich trying to hide from a proctologist. My one gripe with this story is that she jumped in to the relationship a little too quickly.

Dude, that was one hell of a story. While anal isn't my thing, that didn't matter, what matters if the story itself. Characters were well rounded, dialogue was good, not necessarily my strong point but I do try in my stories. Good flow, I know how long and tedious it can be to get details, the setting, dialogue just right to make the story flow coherently. The haters, well they just want to complain when they are getting a free story they don't have to pay for.

bigdaddyg123 has it wrong and reveals that he has some selective preferences that simply don't suit the rest of us. This story was great! A tender-hearted sister who needs some butt-lovin'? What's wrong with that?

Excellent dialogue and character dev. Believable progression of events. Hot!

The story seemed to have much promise for being a romantic, loving, caring brother and sister incestuous love story. Even though Julie had a much storied past, maybe even devil-may-care attitude, there were signs that her maturity had outgrown the shambles she had hoped to leave behind. Later, when Damon lets Jules abortion (when she was eighteen years old) be known, doomed what could have been a great story for me, to the scrap heap!

The siblings feelings for each other had merit and promise, with the hand-holding, the deep emotional glances as they kissed, while doing small intimate things for each other. But shit--literally and figuratively--happens. They enter several phases of not being able to make decisions about each, what to expect nor what to give. First they wanted, and then they didn't, causing rifts and chasms of self doubts as to where their fantasies and expectations for each other were going.

The nail in the coffin (for this reader) was the lack and disregard for consummation of their (sexual) love, with the failure of a good story gone bad was the unnecessary introduction of shit chute activity.....of both parties. The story should be classified (tagged) as anal and domination! Even though, I thought many times the story would turn out to be a sibling consummated and incestuous romance, but each time was disappointed. The writer has merit, but needs to better organize her characters' directions and thought processes on a better keel, with much more emphasis of purpose.....and consummate the fucking sibling sexual, cock to pussy, action.

really enjoyed the sister getting it on with her bro, the anal part was fantastic, thanks for putting pen to paper.

- Really liked this story! Two lonely people finding what they really needed.

Great story, would love to see a followup

she is a lazy useless user and will probably end up walking out after draining all his money. she cares about no one but herself the faster he gets away from her the better off he will be.

After reading many submissions, I'm finally moved to comment. From one writer to another: truly, well done.

George

One if ghe very best i have ever read!!!!

Well I really enjoyed the story! ...and thank goodness he wasnt one of those whiny losers going on and on about how we dant do this before he actually does, lol. She knew her brother pretty well though, cooked him slow! I can hear it though... "Uh, sorry sister, *that* is not going in this ass! NOT happening!" Lol.

"She threw her arms wide and took a step my direction. I leaned to accept her embrace. Unsure where I ought put my hands, I just left them hang behind her."

I see stuff like this in the section more than one would think... I just don't get it. Ive never seen a brother that wouldnt, at the very least, scoop up his sister giving her a good bear hug, crushing her titties into his chest, and it doesnt matter if he wants to fuck her or not. Heh.

Well anyway, obviously Im just getting started in the story but wanted to throw that out there before I forgot! :). Back to reading!

This was a wonderful story to read. Good pacing and characters. Well done. Would like to see more.

really nicely written awsome story cant wait for more on this story maybe part two

Fantastic

WOW...never read a story like this...It was great!

You are an excellent writer. This story was outstanding!!

Thank you.

You are an incredible story teller. I could read your stories endlessly. Thank you for sharing.

I've re-read it again and again, several time a year in fact. It's so hard to find an author that can write and tell a story as well as you do. Thank you. (Again!)

way to rushed and unrealistic and the end sucked big time. she just shows up and takes over his life weasles her way into his bed, pushes her self on him and tells him she is going to fuck his ass. if this had been spread out over years with more talking about what is going on and him having more input then it could have been average but as is subpar needs a rewrite and a good editor.

it reminded me of another time. thank you.

started good but got unrealistic fast. the way she took over his life and pushed the engagment at the party then the fight when they got home. no way she would sleep in the same bed that night and no way he would want her to. the sex was rushed and poorly written adding the ass bashing was a turn off (they have a seperate area for that for a reason) and uncalled for. from the party to the end should have been spread out over months or years and several chapters. think about a rewrite for this with a better more realistic end and stop getting your friends to give rave reviews they are so fake it ruins the site and future stories.

All these near-identical Superb and Best ever comments just have to be from ringers. It ain't the worst but it is NOT superb either!! Fake compliments only lead to more low-grade submissions.

Well written. Very sexy and believable ! Well done.

Well done. One of the best. Keep up this level of writing.

has the best of both worlds: incest and anal!!!!

That is a great fucking story..

Great writer, women have the touch of seduction and pleasure

This was a good story! If you didn't like it write your own story; don't expect someone else's fantasy to coincide with your own.

loved the story but could not stop laughing after i read this part

I enjoyed the plot, the build up, the tension and then the 'last page'

I have many true life stories which are not so believable.

I really enjoyed the story, all the way up the the ending. The end just felt a little rushed, or tacked on, like you gave up on it. Good work though!

It started really good and I wanted to read it till the end and what I got was one of the biggest disappointments you can get out of a story. Really: you destroid a story with very much potential to be one of the best.

My disappointment resolves to the destruction of something that could be beautiful in romance which took a turn to the other side. Where Jules could have been rependent of her horrible past and find a transition into becoming a woman of stature in sincere love, she came to be a manipulator and a user for her own agenda.

Once a slut does not have to mean always a slut, but she certainly proved to be one here as she took control of her brother's life and all she had do offer in return was her well planned agenda to remain a slut.

Sorry, nice start; poor finish...!

This story has been one of my favorites since I first read it a year or two ago. My only regret is that it's not longer. I don't know if you're still writing, but if you are, even a one page extension of this story would be simply fantastic. The story is magnificent, and heartwarming (even accepting the fact of their familial relationship) but the fact that we never get to enjoy their making love vaginally leaves it feeling just slightly...unfinished in a way. Regardless, the story is, again, spectacular, and deserving of a 5/5

the story started good but it got unrealistic after the party. after they fought no girl would have slept in the same bed as him and no guy would want her to. it got better after they made up until she said she was going to fuck his ass and he agreed. that part should have taken atleast several days for them to talk about it and for him to think about it. as said by others the ass play came to soon and was rushed as was the whole sex part. this whole story should have been longer and broken into two or three chapters giving more time to the sex and more time to work up to anal play doesn't deserve a 100 but is better than a 25 probably a40-45

I am thrilled to read the reviews written, no doubt, by the author's relatives. One thanks him for taking a lot of time to tell this unoriginal and tired story. Well, OK, if you have a lot of time on your hands, that's great. Hey, make it longer, why not...

And what a high point..what devoted love, achieving the highest station in life, doing the old back door.

I have no bones to pick with the author; it was an adequate, if pedestrian, outing. The reviewers, though, seem to have a very low threshold of quality or have a lot of time on their hands.

one of the best storie i read so far on this site

Thank you.

A great read with more than just sex.

The sex was well placed and believable.

Thank you.

Loved how you didnt rush into things..taking your time to the sexual parts is the key to a great story.

Very well written. I like the plot and the sex was wonderful. Licking a beautiful woman's ass is a real turn on. 5 stars for you...

Good storytelling style.

Good story idea.

Above-average for proofreading.

Point off for never making the sex live up to the rest of the story.

Point off for "another story ruined by uncalled-for ass sex"

Yeah. I get it that some readers love anal. Just don't drop it into every other romance like it was white lacy lingerie. As others have said, the couple here just get to "doing it the dirty way" on their first morning-after like it was an ordinary thing for newly consummated lovers. It also marked the first and most intense description of the sex between Jules and Damon, but the hotness it was meant to be (I guess) came across as a WTF moment since we'd had no hint or build up to justify that she was going to go there or that he'd tolerate the same in return.

For a typical straight guy, the idea of being penetrated is gonna be a deal breaker or at least a mood-killer. Keep that in mind. Not saying it's off limits at all - just that it's a fetish - that's why anal has its own category. To each his/her own.

Best story I've read on her. Very arousing, well written, really interesting female lead, great job. Love it!

I really like this story. The journey for the siblings to finally concrete their love was wonderful. Keep it up!

Above all, a great love story. Beautifully written and emotionally compelling.

Wow, expertly written. Fact, fiction or a little of both, amazing story!

What a buildup!

If you are a published author please share where we can help you become a New york Times best-selling author, the first to have an incest themed story!

All the best to you and keep writing!

Great Great Story like the guy below said i forgot i was reading an erotic tale and actually felt deep set emotions for the character

How skillfully you wrapped me, the reader, into your web! You started off with the brother a self confident conservative urban businessman and the sister a homeless waif, smelly, unreliable, with an unsavory past. Halfway through, he was madly in lust with her but unable to face the reality of their relationship. By the end of the story, she was desirable, immaculate, and trustworthy enough to take the lead in the remance.

But meanwhile I began to read with a faint tingle of guilt for selecting a story about incest and the hope that it could involve tenderness, not a brutal contest for control. Reading on, I found more and more reason to approve of her as his lover and growing impatience with him to open himself to the possibilities of their situation. Finally when she retreated from him, rejected, hurt and resentful, I felt crushed. So you were playing with my sympathies at the same time that you were playing with your characters' emotions.

I must congratulate you on your management of the two siblings in Seattle and of your reader in Arizona. And you wrapped all that up in the tissue of your wordsmanship to present me with a very nice little gift. Thank you!

Top notch, good pace and interaction of people.

A Literotica masterpiece...took a nice gentle introduction to the characters befor ebuilding the story up into a climax...litterally....as an anal lover...i thought the finale was superb....10/10...and boy did i enjoy it....

This is right up with the best brother-sister stories I have read on Literotica. Loved the way you took a long time to build the tension. More, please.

Hi. I just today found your site. This is a very good story. I see you did it in 05. I sure wish their was a second part that I could read.

Jim

jimboone3@aol.com

GREAT STORY, I LIVE IN SEATTLE SO THIS STORY HAS SPECIAL SIGNIFICANCE.

Excellent build up, excellent execution, and the anal-play is an act that doesn't often show up in erotica, as a fan of it myself, I enjoyed this immensely!

a fine work......well written.......enjoyed it immensely.

...anus oral massaging and all. I appreciate your work here, and you including all aspects of a good erotic story. Quite a range of emotions. It always seems the brother is the last to know and to figure he loves his sister. Makes a good story anyway. I also appreciate the way you led them to 'Marriage'. Jules' comments at the party were hilarious, but they got the job done. Again, thanks! Jim

I was really enjoying it, until she asked him to lick her ass. That may not be the grossest thing you can and still call it "sex", but it'll do. Ass fucking is only slightly better, and I don't care who's ass it is that gets fucked. Any rating I gave is based on the first part; after that I was skipping forward to give my rating and comment, And don't give me any "If you didn't like it why did you read it?" I read it as long as it was a love story. It's sad thar she was trained into liking that; I was reminded of a story called "Poor Annie", where a woman was raped and discovered she liked it. This could have been titled "Poor Jules".

Bha! what rigid and old views! love the ending and it makes perfect sens... give and get... and it has nothing to do whit your sexuallity whether u like it up the but or not...

Love it. really love it!!!

Now I whant to know about when she took his asscherry =)

xoxo //Per

Got to agree with last two posts, great story but that her fucking him up there ass thing kinda ruined it. A man doesn't have to be gay to enjoy anal penetration but it just didn't fit the morning after they first got together.

This was an amazing story, until the end. when she wanted to fuck him up the ass; is where i drew the line. there was never anything leading to him being bisexual or anything, so why was he even ok with that?? it was a little weird so i had to take my score down for that. other than that...i loved it!

This story was 100% perfect for me right up untill you had the sister say she was going to fuck him up the ass???? NO matter how freaky you get thats just stupid and sick, if your gay or bisexual fair enough but for someone to say i'm going to fuck you in the ass only 1 night after you have sex with them thats abit 2 much and unrealistic in contents of the story, it ruined a great story and thats why i give it 25% on the didn't like it-loved it scale, you ruined the whole story with that one line, idiot

Enjoyed the dtory throughly both characters are complex. Ever thought of doing a where are they now type of story

that was a great story....just wished for a little more..

The care and time you expended in building this story up were well worth the effort. Head and shoulders above the average effort here. Congrats!

Very nice story, nice stile

I koved the story. reading this i could see every thing play out as if i was watching a movie, but only better

thank you

One of the most wonderful stories I've read on this site. Simply supurb!

It was not filled with endless "oh baby do me" and "oh god that is great" it worked up to the end perfectly.

I thoroughly enjoyed your beautiful sibling love story. This is one of the best I have ever read in this genre.

The brothers cock could have been described better and the Pussy Fucking a bit more lengthy but still good

Everything about this story simply oozed with class. You've taken erotica to a whole new level as far as I'm concerned.

Simply superb.

thank you.

the story has all the right ingredients, told with the right degree of both seriousness and silliness, of loneliness (each sibling by himself or herself) and solidarity,,,

again, awesome story. thank you.

that was one HECK of a story. B-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l!!!

True erotica is about relationships blossoming with a hint of physical needs, culminating in the explosion of passion that is described in gentle words depicting what by nature is a tempest wrapped in a hurricane.

You, Ma'am, are an artist. If I ever thought of putting pen to paper, I would not hesitate to imitate your style.

To some this up in a few words: a work of a genius, so well described and so well played out. Could there be an idea for part 2 perhaps?

This is such an incredible story! Great setup, great writing, great dialogue, it's so sexy!

the story could have been a 5, if the brother wasn't such a tool! What a retard! How could a grown man be so clueless? He has this beautiful sister the he worships and longs for and he's a skinny, lonely nerd. She's making all these advances toward him an he's

comlepletely cluless. I expected him to cry when sis kissed him at the party. This could have been so much more erotic.

Erotic, romantic and very naughty without any of the cliched coarse language.

Hi Penny,

Maybe you don`t like the name Penny but I can`t spell penelope. A beautiful and excently written story. It became real in my mind. So real that I could smell the sex. So real that I had a hard prick through the entire story. So real that I had to stop every so often and play with that hard prick. Thank you for that. I love incest and your story is the best incest story that I have ever read. More more more Please. John P