All Comments on 'Family Jules'

I have to say that this is one of the hottest stories i have ever read on this site. It took it's time getting to the sex and then when the sex finally happened..it was intense and satifying. Great Job!!!!

Great story. You built it up very well. Good ending.

This was a very nice story that had both eroticism and depth of feeling. It had nicely realistic dialogue and went exactly where I wanted it to go, based on the character set-up. Well done.

I have ever read! True talent has shown up for me to imbibe in a world you created with words. I was simply lost in your tale. Writing was some of the best I have ever had the pleasure to read here! Thank you so much for your story.

What a loving tale that was as good as it gets.

Sexmate!

P.S. I am putting this on my favorites list!!!!

This story has class with a capital C. Great plot, Really well developed charactors and set in a city you obviously love. Very well done

I usually don't read a story with so many pages, mostly because they go into so much detail but your story was a page turner couldn't wait to click next for more... good job

I'm afraid we're going to have to kick you out of litertotica. You actually wrote a coherent quality story, with real characters, a real plot and top notch sex. That's just not allowed around here.

You definitely are a superior writer, and story teller. The story not only was wonderfully erotic, but the plot and character development were top notch. Please continue to do so. Hopefully other writers will use this as an example for a great story.

well written. the characters:

- if he does not want kids with anyone, why not a vasectomy?

- they should see a marraige counselor if they are staying together. very real - they have communication problems already. he has low socialization, and she does not cleary express what she wants. i have know several beginning couples, and even couples together for years with those problems. too many depend on magical telepathy that isn't there.

I just wanted to say that I couldn't stop reading. Usually when I'm online I flip back and forth from one window to the other. Not this time. Very nice build up to the inevitable conclusion. Top-notch story.

I can say without a doubt after reading hundreds and hundreds of stories for years on Literotica, that this is the best story I have ever read.

Great stuff. The best stories I've read here in a long time.

Best thing I've read on here it ages.

Nicely written and developed! I ejoyed NO children and that she escaped from Houston! Please continue to write. R

Every one agrees it is an excellent story and it is perfect and well written. I think at least another chapter would finish it off.

Well written ,kept me interested and hard

Excellent writing and plausible plot development. How about a story where a beautiful twenty year old seduces her somewhat older brother with a painfully slow, sensuous striptease, resulting in the nailing of her life? That would be erotic, and you could certainly make it seem real.

Thank you for an beautiful story!

All of the elements of a good romance: Warmth, passion, pain, history and a future. Thanks for a wonderful story.

Now all I have to do is fine a talented, intelligent, witty writer for a girlfriend and my life will be complete! Again... thank you, Penelope.

Leslie

A GREAT GREAT story! I was sad to come to the end of it...

This is absolutely wonderful! I loved every word of it!

Great climatic story. romantic, sensual, and highly erotic.

A lot of stories pay little attention to the establishment of mood or making the characters real to the audience through their interactions; this story did that perfectly.

The grammar was without fault and I have very rarely read such a highly charged, sensually erotic piece of fiction.

Very well done indeed. I do hope that more chapters will be forthcoming

an excellent piece. above all, it is literate. fine character studies within a relatively small framework. i look forward to reading more of your work. please keep writing!

Great writing. Great tone and story.

That would have to be one of the best stories i have read for a long time keep up the good work.

That was the best story that I have ever read. It is better then all the books on the new york best sellers list. I can not wait for another story from you.. I love it!! Thank you for writing such a great story. you did not only get hot sex but you also got a great plot.

"WOW" what a truely great story love this from beginning to the end, could have been there in the room seeing the brother and sister having such a great fuck in the ass this has to be one of the best story so far fantastic and erotic

great stuff do hope there is a follow up to this story.

Others have already said it, but this is a brilliantly crafted story. The characters evolve, there is believable motivation behind what they do, and the sex scenes are very erotic -- even to someone who usually is squeamish about incest stories. Congratulations, Penelope, you are one of literotica's "jules."

Absolutely amazing, drew me in wonderfully, and is amazingly hot.

Family Jules is the best erotic story I have read. It includes all the best in romance with a great storyline and excellent ending. Penelope, you write superbly, and I have enjoyed each of your stories. Please keep writing.

Beautifully constructed, carefully drawn out, full of real and compelling desire... how can I add to the praises others have given it?

Hi Penny,

Maybe you don`t like the name Penny but I can`t spell penelope. A beautiful and excently written story. It became real in my mind. So real that I could smell the sex. So real that I had a hard prick through the entire story. So real that I had to stop every so often and play with that hard prick. Thank you for that. I love incest and your story is the best incest story that I have ever read. More more more Please. John P

Erotic, romantic and very naughty without any of the cliched coarse language.

the story could have been a 5, if the brother wasn't such a tool! What a retard! How could a grown man be so clueless? He has this beautiful sister the he worships and longs for and he's a skinny, lonely nerd. She's making all these advances toward him an he's

comlepletely cluless. I expected him to cry when sis kissed him at the party. This could have been so much more erotic.

This is such an incredible story! Great setup, great writing, great dialogue, it's so sexy!

To some this up in a few words: a work of a genius, so well described and so well played out. Could there be an idea for part 2 perhaps?

True erotica is about relationships blossoming with a hint of physical needs, culminating in the explosion of passion that is described in gentle words depicting what by nature is a tempest wrapped in a hurricane.

You, Ma'am, are an artist. If I ever thought of putting pen to paper, I would not hesitate to imitate your style.

that was one HECK of a story. B-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l!!!

thank you.

the story has all the right ingredients, told with the right degree of both seriousness and silliness, of loneliness (each sibling by himself or herself) and solidarity,,,

again, awesome story. thank you.

Everything about this story simply oozed with class. You've taken erotica to a whole new level as far as I'm concerned.

Simply superb.

The brothers cock could have been described better and the Pussy Fucking a bit more lengthy but still good

I thoroughly enjoyed your beautiful sibling love story. This is one of the best I have ever read in this genre.

It was not filled with endless "oh baby do me" and "oh god that is great" it worked up to the end perfectly.

One of the most wonderful stories I've read on this site. Simply supurb!

I koved the story. reading this i could see every thing play out as if i was watching a movie, but only better

thank you

Very nice story, nice stile

The care and time you expended in building this story up were well worth the effort. Head and shoulders above the average effort here. Congrats!

that was a great story....just wished for a little more..

Enjoyed the dtory throughly both characters are complex. Ever thought of doing a where are they now type of story

This story was 100% perfect for me right up untill you had the sister say she was going to fuck him up the ass???? NO matter how freaky you get thats just stupid and sick, if your gay or bisexual fair enough but for someone to say i'm going to fuck you in the ass only 1 night after you have sex with them thats abit 2 much and unrealistic in contents of the story, it ruined a great story and thats why i give it 25% on the didn't like it-loved it scale, you ruined the whole story with that one line, idiot

This was an amazing story, until the end. when she wanted to fuck him up the ass; is where i drew the line. there was never anything leading to him being bisexual or anything, so why was he even ok with that?? it was a little weird so i had to take my score down for that. other than that...i loved it!

Got to agree with last two posts, great story but that her fucking him up there ass thing kinda ruined it. A man doesn't have to be gay to enjoy anal penetration but it just didn't fit the morning after they first got together.

Bha! what rigid and old views! love the ending and it makes perfect sens... give and get... and it has nothing to do whit your sexuallity whether u like it up the but or not...

Love it. really love it!!!

Now I whant to know about when she took his asscherry =)

xoxo //Per

I was really enjoying it, until she asked him to lick her ass. That may not be the grossest thing you can and still call it "sex", but it'll do. Ass fucking is only slightly better, and I don't care who's ass it is that gets fucked. Any rating I gave is based on the first part; after that I was skipping forward to give my rating and comment, And don't give me any "If you didn't like it why did you read it?" I read it as long as it was a love story. It's sad thar she was trained into liking that; I was reminded of a story called "Poor Annie", where a woman was raped and discovered she liked it. This could have been titled "Poor Jules".

...anus oral massaging and all. I appreciate your work here, and you including all aspects of a good erotic story. Quite a range of emotions. It always seems the brother is the last to know and to figure he loves his sister. Makes a good story anyway. I also appreciate the way you led them to 'Marriage'. Jules' comments at the party were hilarious, but they got the job done. Again, thanks! Jim

a fine work......well written.......enjoyed it immensely.

Excellent build up, excellent execution, and the anal-play is an act that doesn't often show up in erotica, as a fan of it myself, I enjoyed this immensely!

GREAT STORY, I LIVE IN SEATTLE SO THIS STORY HAS SPECIAL SIGNIFICANCE.

Hi. I just today found your site. This is a very good story. I see you did it in 05. I sure wish their was a second part that I could read.

Jim

jimboone3@aol.com

This is right up with the best brother-sister stories I have read on Literotica. Loved the way you took a long time to build the tension. More, please.

A Literotica masterpiece...took a nice gentle introduction to the characters befor ebuilding the story up into a climax...litterally....as an anal lover...i thought the finale was superb....10/10...and boy did i enjoy it....

Top notch, good pace and interaction of people.

How skillfully you wrapped me, the reader, into your web! You started off with the brother a self confident conservative urban businessman and the sister a homeless waif, smelly, unreliable, with an unsavory past. Halfway through, he was madly in lust with her but unable to face the reality of their relationship. By the end of the story, she was desirable, immaculate, and trustworthy enough to take the lead in the remance.

But meanwhile I began to read with a faint tingle of guilt for selecting a story about incest and the hope that it could involve tenderness, not a brutal contest for control. Reading on, I found more and more reason to approve of her as his lover and growing impatience with him to open himself to the possibilities of their situation. Finally when she retreated from him, rejected, hurt and resentful, I felt crushed. So you were playing with my sympathies at the same time that you were playing with your characters' emotions.

I must congratulate you on your management of the two siblings in Seattle and of your reader in Arizona. And you wrapped all that up in the tissue of your wordsmanship to present me with a very nice little gift. Thank you!

Great Great Story like the guy below said i forgot i was reading an erotic tale and actually felt deep set emotions for the character

Wow, expertly written. Fact, fiction or a little of both, amazing story!

What a buildup!

If you are a published author please share where we can help you become a New york Times best-selling author, the first to have an incest themed story!

All the best to you and keep writing!

Above all, a great love story. Beautifully written and emotionally compelling.

I really like this story. The journey for the siblings to finally concrete their love was wonderful. Keep it up!

Best story I've read on her. Very arousing, well written, really interesting female lead, great job. Love it!

Good storytelling style.

Good story idea.

Above-average for proofreading.

Point off for never making the sex live up to the rest of the story.

Point off for "another story ruined by uncalled-for ass sex"

Yeah. I get it that some readers love anal. Just don't drop it into every other romance like it was white lacy lingerie. As others have said, the couple here just get to "doing it the dirty way" on their first morning-after like it was an ordinary thing for newly consummated lovers. It also marked the first and most intense description of the sex between Jules and Damon, but the hotness it was meant to be (I guess) came across as a WTF moment since we'd had no hint or build up to justify that she was going to go there or that he'd tolerate the same in return.

For a typical straight guy, the idea of being penetrated is gonna be a deal breaker or at least a mood-killer. Keep that in mind. Not saying it's off limits at all - just that it's a fetish - that's why anal has its own category. To each his/her own.

Very well written. I like the plot and the sex was wonderful. Licking a beautiful woman's ass is a real turn on. 5 stars for you...

Loved how you didnt rush into things..taking your time to the sexual parts is the key to a great story.

A great read with more than just sex.

The sex was well placed and believable.

Thank you.

Thank you.

one of the best storie i read so far on this site

I am thrilled to read the reviews written, no doubt, by the author's relatives. One thanks him for taking a lot of time to tell this unoriginal and tired story. Well, OK, if you have a lot of time on your hands, that's great. Hey, make it longer, why not...

And what a high point..what devoted love, achieving the highest station in life, doing the old back door.

I have no bones to pick with the author; it was an adequate, if pedestrian, outing. The reviewers, though, seem to have a very low threshold of quality or have a lot of time on their hands.

the story started good but it got unrealistic after the party. after they fought no girl would have slept in the same bed as him and no guy would want her to. it got better after they made up until she said she was going to fuck his ass and he agreed. that part should have taken atleast several days for them to talk about it and for him to think about it. as said by others the ass play came to soon and was rushed as was the whole sex part. this whole story should have been longer and broken into two or three chapters giving more time to the sex and more time to work up to anal play doesn't deserve a 100 but is better than a 25 probably a40-45

This story has been one of my favorites since I first read it a year or two ago. My only regret is that it's not longer. I don't know if you're still writing, but if you are, even a one page extension of this story would be simply fantastic. The story is magnificent, and heartwarming (even accepting the fact of their familial relationship) but the fact that we never get to enjoy their making love vaginally leaves it feeling just slightly...unfinished in a way. Regardless, the story is, again, spectacular, and deserving of a 5/5

My disappointment resolves to the destruction of something that could be beautiful in romance which took a turn to the other side. Where Jules could have been rependent of her horrible past and find a transition into becoming a woman of stature in sincere love, she came to be a manipulator and a user for her own agenda.

Once a slut does not have to mean always a slut, but she certainly proved to be one here as she took control of her brother's life and all she had do offer in return was her well planned agenda to remain a slut.

Sorry, nice start; poor finish...!

It started really good and I wanted to read it till the end and what I got was one of the biggest disappointments you can get out of a story. Really: you destroid a story with very much potential to be one of the best.

I really enjoyed the story, all the way up the the ending. The end just felt a little rushed, or tacked on, like you gave up on it. Good work though!

I enjoyed the plot, the build up, the tension and then the 'last page'

I have many true life stories which are not so believable.

loved the story but could not stop laughing after i read this part

This was a good story! If you didn't like it write your own story; don't expect someone else's fantasy to coincide with your own.

Great writer, women have the touch of seduction and pleasure

That is a great fucking story..

has the best of both worlds: incest and anal!!!!

Well done. One of the best. Keep up this level of writing.

Well written. Very sexy and believable ! Well done.

All these near-identical Superb and Best ever comments just have to be from ringers. It ain't the worst but it is NOT superb either!! Fake compliments only lead to more low-grade submissions.

started good but got unrealistic fast. the way she took over his life and pushed the engagment at the party then the fight when they got home. no way she would sleep in the same bed that night and no way he would want her to. the sex was rushed and poorly written adding the ass bashing was a turn off (they have a seperate area for that for a reason) and uncalled for. from the party to the end should have been spread out over months or years and several chapters. think about a rewrite for this with a better more realistic end and stop getting your friends to give rave reviews they are so fake it ruins the site and future stories.

it reminded me of another time. thank you.

way to rushed and unrealistic and the end sucked big time. she just shows up and takes over his life weasles her way into his bed, pushes her self on him and tells him she is going to fuck his ass. if this had been spread out over years with more talking about what is going on and him having more input then it could have been average but as is subpar needs a rewrite and a good editor.

I've re-read it again and again, several time a year in fact. It's so hard to find an author that can write and tell a story as well as you do. Thank you. (Again!)

You are an incredible story teller. I could read your stories endlessly. Thank you for sharing.

You are an excellent writer. This story was outstanding!!

Thank you.

WOW...never read a story like this...It was great!

Fantastic

really nicely written awsome story cant wait for more on this story maybe part two