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After five minutes of his slowly increasing speed he stopped and bent over me to talk to me. "How are you doing little one?"
"I'm doing fine. How are you doing?"
"You come yet?"
"Nope. Have you?"
"You must be getting frustrated. It looks like at least 12 guys have fucked you since the last time I was here."
"Most of them were so quick I hardly noticed." He belted out a loud laugh and stood up. He proceeded to start is long in and out strokes again.
He built to the point where his balls were slapping my clit again. Try as I might the combination was starting to affect me but I had a way to go before I lost it. All the fucking I had been getting must have numbed me some.
He stopped moving and bent over me again "If you somehow manage to hold out, be careful how you phrase your request. Something phrased one way may be rejected but phrased a different way may be accepted. Females will never be allowed in this lodge except in your current capacity in case you were wondering." He stood up, backed out of me and left.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 8 years agoI thought the story was very interesting and a little unique. Enjoyed it!
Tigersmanabout 9 years agoI too think you need an editor. It would really help to wait a couple of days then print your story off so you can take your time to read it through slowly. It seems that you are relying too much on spellcheck. Spellcheck only tells you if the word used is spelled correctly
Anonymousover 9 years agoPersonally I did not think that much of the story but that is just my opinion somebody else may think otherwise.
Morlan502over 9 years agoYou really needed an editor on this chapter. Lots of typos, and a couple of spots that just did not make any sense at all.
